|Reviews for Exporter of Hope|
| SiahXSiren chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
I liked it
| Fainting In Coils chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Very nice poem! Not quite a haiku, since it's 6-7-4 instead of 5-7-5, but nice all the same. Not sure how to turn it into a proper haiku, though... You could take out 'the' in the first line and it'd be just fine, but the third line is a bit trickier. An 'and' at the beginning would work, technically speaking, but it would sound clunky... Anyway, it wouldn't bother me at all if it were under General rather than Haiku, so it's probably not much of an issue as far as the poem in general goes.
Keep up the good work!