Reviews for Swoon Song
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Very nice. Keep it up :D
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Is it bad that I blushed at this? Yes, it's somewhat jolting, but it's incredibly clever and, I think, well-handled. Nice work.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
pretty icky and crass...not sure what i think.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Wow, that's pretty graphic yet incredibly clever. O_O Creative indeed! Keep writing!

Anna _
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
I like the wordplay in the title. Swoon, like Swan. But then, we already know that you're clever.

You know, I never thought about it quite that way, but it's true. You're so good at drawing attention to the clever/quirky bits of reality, and then spinning them into interesting words.

it's good.

.darker shade of pale
nickyO chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
A little icky on this one Punslinger, too clinical and reminds girls of something that actually hurts regardless of what romance fiction would have people believe.
SirScott chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Not really for sure what to think about this one.

SirScott