Reviews for Blaze
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I LOVEDDDDD this poem especially "After our game we return to our dreams. A world where things aren't what it seems" That line was classicly geniousssss. Outstanding job, Keep it up .
SiahXSiren chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Only mistakes i saw were in the first and last line, you used 'you' instead of your and used an apostrophe in the word others so that you spelt it 'other's' there shouldn't be an apostrophe in that word,

beautiful poem though