| Reviews for On the Run |
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  Guest chapter 20 . 11/15/2012 hey no need to worry :) i LOVED this chapter, and i bet others did too :D good job again! although i'm feeling a bit anxious. Lol, i hope nothing 'unfortunate' happens in the end :)) i really like how the story is right now :D cheers to another awesome chapter :) |
 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling chapter 20 . 11/15/2012 Okay...so they're together now! XD You are continuing this for...? |
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/15/2012 Awww, finally! Beautifully written chapter! Thx for this, it really made my day... :-) |
| Sko12342 chapter 20 . 11/15/2012 I was in the middle of class while reading this.. I almost went "Awwww" five times. |
| Bubbly Girl chapter 20 . 11/14/2012 Aww! Finally! :) Crazy boy! What was he thinking, making her wait so long for him? :) Oh well. All's well that ends well, right? Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) Bubbly Girl |
| Bookworm-At-Starbucks chapter 20 . 11/14/2012 I thought the story ended! Guess not which means more for me! I love it. Kinda rushed but still nevertheless love it. |
| blurrylights chapter 20 . 11/14/2012 i loved this chapter- i'm so glad they've finally accepted their feelings. it did come off as a little fast, but i guess they've been through quite a lot so it kind of makes sense. i'm dreading whatever you have coming next though- i feel like you still have a few tricks up your sleeve! i just want them to be happy :) |
| MissColly chapter 19 . 11/10/2012 Sorry I took a while to review, this chapter was perfect, like it always is. I think there was one minor typo that I realised but I can't find it now, it was somewhere near the beginning of the chapter. The conversation with her friends was hilarious, and I felt that Tori really needed to be around her friends after all that's going on. You know, I didn't realise you named both the female detective and her friend Olivia until this chapter too! But there's actually no problem with that, cause loads of people have the same name, it's actually adding to the realism of your story. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one, as always. |
| Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling chapter 19 . 11/10/2012 Awesome story! :) I love the complicated parts and am looking forward to your promised update! ;D |
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/9/2012 gahhh, i just can't get over this awesome story :) thanks for the update! |
| helen chapter 19 . 11/7/2012 I like this. Please update soon! |
| Bookworm-At-Starbucks chapter 19 . 11/4/2012 Finally you're back! I love it and was upset when it ended. Lol about the Olivia thing. |
| foreternity chapter 19 . 11/2/2012 YAYAYAYYY :) awwww pooor tori. when will ryan ever realize it and confront hiss fearsss! (: hope you'll update sooonn! :) oh and happy halloweeen :D |
| Jaden Ink chapter 19 . 11/2/2012 Yay for NaNoWriMo! my story is on hold too till december... im sad.. i cant wait till they get together ryan is such a dunce... |
| Clawstrike590 chapter 19 . 11/2/2012 Awesome chapter! Can't wait for your next update, but don't rush. Hahaha. Just excited. Anyway, awesome chapter and I actually like the two Olivias. It makes the story slightly realistic 'cause names aren't really uncommon, like Pat (which could be Patrick or Patricia). It's fun to have Tori deal with two people of the same name but different personalities. Hope you're doing fine. Still your faithful reader, Clawstrike590 |