Reviews for On the Run
Northfacegrl5 chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Carmel March chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Yes yes yes, Ryan loooooves Tori! Olivia was right - sometimes a push is needed.

That beginning scene was very well done. I just loved it for some reason. It was great to address Tori's attitude post-ordeal. And they are just so cute together :)

I'm sad that this is wrapping up, but really excited to see how Tori and Ryan's story will end. Looking forward to more!
Choukou chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Ahhh, I feel the story is coming to an end... once Ryan gets it through his thick skull to go to Tori. And maybe a few mishaps on the way. I did catch one thing though:

"That" instead of "thank"
"We listened to thank one already," Ryan replied.
Midnight113 chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Olivia is right, he should go for it and the heck with everything else. ;) Lovely work, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the amazing work!
gulistala chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Yay an update! I was just starting to wonder why Ryan had all but disappeared from Tori's life. I wonder if he's going to take Olivia's advice next chapter.
Dancing in Crimson chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
This is an AWESOME chapter! You have to update soon because I'm completely and totally obsessed with this story! :D
helen chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
I love this story so much! Tor iand Ryan are perfect for one another and I wish I could shake Ryan and tell him that he's NOT being selfish by going over Tori. And I like Olivia and her shove in the right direction. Hopefully he lets her know how he feels soon!

I love this and I want them to get together but I know that means it's coming to an end. :(
Ceri Anne chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
So little Tori and Ryan! :( But still an excellent chapter. Tori's friends are fantastic and I loved Olivia (FBI Olivia that is ;)) Looking forward to the next chapter (I don't think it's cheating - it's just thinking ahead!)
anon chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Amazing as usual. Was hoping for an updated for Halloween. Thanks for delivering.
heal me forever chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
wow good one how many more parts wen is he saying it aloud :)
Bubbly Girl chapter 19 . 11/1/2012
Yay! :) An update! I just love this story so try and update as soon as possible! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
Thess2002 chapter 19 . 10/31/2012
OMG, Ryan is so dense! Man up and go get your girl Ryan! :-)
Great chapter, as always!
nolongeractive1234567654323 chapter 19 . 10/31/2012
You're doing NaNo? Me too! What's your username? You should add me as a "writing buddy" if you don't find that too creepy ahaha-it's "chosohuy"

Anyway, about the story. Grrr. Ryan can be so...infuriating sometimes! But he has Tori's best interests at heart, so I forgive him. Tori's friends are hilarious, lol. It's obvious they're close :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!
leavesfallingup chapter 19 . 10/31/2012
Ryan is being an idiot. Worse, he's hurting Tori in the process.

Olivia is actually a rather common name in Texas. It is also common in the FBI, where the demographics show a greater-than-usual sprinkling of women of Italian descent... so no problem.

One correction. You typed "Did you that he put his job on the line and killed Rhider?"
I think that you forgot the word "know"
whisperedcares chapter 19 . 10/31/2012
So I read all 18 of On The Run, and then skipped about your other stories loving every single one but the two I have yet to read (the ones with only two chaps each). And I'm extremely happy that you have characters with my name spelling: Caranothing's bough they're nothing like the abnormal clumsy geek I am, but strong shexy gals).
And after finishing chapter nineteen, I have to say I really love your stories, writing style, and AU personality that I've seen in your notes.
Happy Halloween; your New Avidly Obsessed Reader:
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