| Reviews for On the Run |
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   renegade01 chapter 19 . 10/31/2012 i think ryan needs more than just a push... possibly a hard shove ;) |
| Daddy's Little Peach chapter 19 . 10/31/2012 I get a feeling we're near the end :( noooooooo! Ryan is duuumb, but I can understand why - his reasons are noble at least! And I'm glad Tori is still 'Tori' - she doesn't strike me as the kind of person who would withdraw into her shell, so thumbs up for writing a consistent character! Haha it's funny that you mention that November is almost here - I've had nearly ten hours of November :p Just one part that I didn't quite get - 'Although he'd been there for my breakdown the night before and I had not cried all the tears I could cry nor had I come to terms with what my escape had cost' - I might be reading it wrong, but it doesn't quite make sense to me? Ciaocioaciao! Mish xx |
| Writing In Ink Forever chapter 19 . 10/31/2012 I love your characters. And I was like, huh? Olivia doesn't know Ryan. Bahaha. You had me all confused. I'm excited for the next update. This is a very original for an FBI show. -coco |
| anon chapter 18 . 10/31/2012 Waiting for this to update is like waiting for rain in this drought. (a Cinderella story, anyone?) |
| Hannah chapter 18 . 10/27/2012 I've come across this story so many times in the past and just ignored it but I'm glad I finally decided to read it. It's got an amazing story line and I can't wait to see where Ryan and Tori end up. Hope you update soon! |
| maxmatt chapter 18 . 10/26/2012 SOOOO AWESOME! Update soon! |
| lanagon39 chapter 18 . 10/26/2012 Ahhh, but it feels so close to the end! Which is exciting, but I'm going to miss this so much when it's over (ノ；；)ノ |
| LoveAntiquity chapter 18 . 10/26/2012 You have such a wonderful way of writing, your stories run so smoothly. I'm really looking forward to your next update :) |
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/23/2012 Another awesome chapter :((((( looking forward to the next :D |
| Sko12342 chapter 18 . 10/22/2012 This is my new favorite story. A couple of months ago I tried reading this story, but kinda forgot about it when I started reading another. Yesterday I thought "What the heck" And started reading it. Best thought ever. Thank you for writing this |
| GingerNeverDies chapter 18 . 10/20/2012 OMG! this story is brilliant...much like the rest of your stories. I aspire to be such a visionary writer as yourself! keep up the wonderful work and please please please post a new chapter soon |
| My Works 87 chapter 18 . 10/20/2012 Loving this! Can't wait for an update |
| Midnight113 chapter 18 . 10/20/2012 Aw, I loved it! So sweet, I love them together. Please update soon, I want to read more! ;) |
| Carmel March chapter 18 . 10/20/2012 Ackkk, I am so thrilled that Tori and Ryan are together again! I really like that you're approaching their situation realistically, with Tori understandably emotionally scarred from her ordeal and Ryan slow to admit his feelings. I loved, loved, loved this chapter. You are brilliant :) I can't wait to see how things progress from here! |
| dress chapter 18 . 10/20/2012 omg this is too cute for words 3 |