Reviews for On the Run |
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Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 chapter 18 . 10/19/2012 I love, love, love that she called Ryan out on leaving her in hotel rooms all the time! I was thinking exactly the same thing when he had a go at Johnny. Brilliant! I also loved him not wanting to play Uno and the way you made mention of the PTSD thing. The line 'It wasn't comforting, being the supposed good person in all this. Because I didn't feel all that good.' it was my definite favourite of the chapter. It's so good to see them together again, but I'm freaking out over Ryan's stoicism. I mean, I know he's not going to go all gooey, that would be weird and out of character, but all this 'maybe' stuff. Pfft! He just needs to man up and admit he'd follow her around forever if she asked! Loved this and I'm very much looking forward to seeing how it ends. Congratulations on your SKoW win too! Very much deserved! |
nolongeractive1234567654323 chapter 18 . 10/19/2012 So...many...emotions! "I do." "You love her." He shrugged. NO! Why only shrug? Haha, he better say it out loud, to Tori, soon! ;) Love this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one-more Ryan/Tori moments! :D |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/19/2012 love love looooooove! |
KelsonaAnn luv yahhha chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 awwwww, thts so sweet |
funnechick chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 It's probably sad, but as I was thinking about this story, about a week ago, I couldn't remember if it had ended with the last chapter and them reuniting. So, I was very happy when I got an email about the update and saw that it wasn't the epilogue. I loved that comment Tori made about being too tired to make out. It was so funny and completely Tori. :) Congrats on winning that category. I'm sure it was stiff competion. However, you completely deserve it. I'm pretty certain that if it isn't already, as soon as you complete this story, it's going on my favorites list. :) Can't wait for your next update! |
Delilah Lillith chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 Usually I don't review stories that are already so far in because I feel that the author is too far into the story to care, but I absolutely have to for this one. Your story is realistic and so fascinating that I've been reading it all day! I cannot wait for you to update this and continue it. While there are grammar mistakes every now and then it doesn't take away from your story one bit. You're a great writer and I hope you keep it up! |
Jaden Ink chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 NOT ENOUGH! lol Gosh, I love your writing style... it makes me envious... Update soon! |
anon chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 Finally. And perfect. |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 I love this. Please don't ever end it. :) |
heal me forever chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 so sweet love ryan update soon :) |
Bas chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 I love it! It's sweet and cute and Ryan, you munchkin! Love your work as always, can't wait for more. |
Ceri Anne chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 Ahhhh, Ryan. How I adore thee. Can I please take him home and keep him in my wardrobe? I promise to feed and water him! As always this was a brilliant chapter, looking forward to the next. |
WritingKnightmare chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 Excellent chapter as per usual. Made me smile. I'm sad that it's almost over though. Definitely goin to reread this one. WritingKnightmare(sorry, too tired to make a better review) |
dream-beautiful chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 Awwww. Dammit. So cute. Haha, you did manage to squeeze in some action for Ryan in there, ounching Johnnuy. |
Tessa Anne chapter 18 . 10/18/2012 That was one incredible chapter...please continue...I hope that Ryan and Tori ends up together...they're so cute! |