Wowzers! XD So much happened in this chapter and ohmygosh my heart goes out to Tori. Poor thing she has to deal with these crazy Mafia men just because she had a short term boyfriend XD.

I loved loved LOVED how you portrayed Sumner in this whole chapter. He was protective, hot and so adorable as he tried to find out where Tori was. Is it terrible of me that I loved how out of control and unstable he felt knowing that Tori was in danger. I hope he gets her back and they share a wonderful kiss and everything XD. They deserve to be together, and Sumner BETTER get his act together and realize that they belong with each other. XD

Anyways, fabulous chapter my dear. Oh and I've heard of SKoW before but could you please explain it a bit more? Where do I go and vote?! Where is this whole shenanigan at?! Where do I go?

Can't wait until your next update! :D

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I blinked. "Just moments ago you were trying to comfort me." And then I glanced from the grinning dark haired man to his shorter accomplice and sighed. "On second thought, nix the medicine. I probably shouldn't trust anything you give me. It could be poisoned."

"Oh Alik, I like her."
Hehehe, even in a dangerous situation I love the way Tori acts and behaves XD She's just amazing.

But then she hadn't thought shed have to be on guard as Ryan Sumner had never been a particularly irritable agent. She studied the impatience straining his features and the uncharacteristic temperament flashing in his green eyes.
Aww :P I just love the way you described him here :)

Tori. He could hear her crying out in pain, over and over, and he spent the entire drive to the other side of Dallas torturing himself with the possibilities. But it was nothing, nothing compared to what they could be doing to her. What they most likely were.
DON'T WORRY RYAN YOU'LL GET HER BACK! And then, you know, you can hug and kiss each other and have a nice little reunion XD

THIS IS SO GOOD! I am seriously addicted!

Oh wow, things are getting intense now. Loved that Rhider/Ryan scene. Great confrontation. Also, her feelings and reactions to her surroundings in the beginning were very well done. I'm excited for the next one!

Yay, next chapter up! It's such a good feeling when you send a chapter that's been giving you trouble out into the world, hey?

Thanks for the thanks, although getting a sneak peek at a story I'm enjoying makes it me who should be thanking you!

Congratulations on the SKoW nomination, that's awesome and very deserved!

I can't wait for the next chapter, I have a sense the Russians are going to receive a visit...!

Cheers!

I loved everything in this chapter. It was so tense and I felt I was trapped in there with Tori. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Tori tries to escape.

BWWWAAAHHHHHH YYEEEESSSSSSS I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED. I've been checking every day since I came upon this story last month. I cannot wait until you update again! You're so talented, my god.

SO GOOD!

Though I do appreciate what he did to Jeremy, I can't imagine that the FBI will be happy with him giving back the hard drive.

Will they give her back now? Mobster types prefer to cut their losses and they don't like to leave witnesses behind.

Yay anothe chapter. I liked it and look forward for more haha and the call made me laugh.

Oh I've been waiting for Ryan to find Rhider! I've wanted Ryan to get back at him for a while! Update again soon, the suspense is killing me!

you updated! (: amazing :D oooh, a broken finger, that must really hurt :/ ryan is getting the "cute-protective-where-is-she-if-you-touch-her-imma-kill-you" attitude (: update!

Yup! Great chapter as always, though I think I told you that already. :) but anyways, I thought the extra description in the beginning made a lot more sense to distinguish Alik and Tomas, so great job. And I still love the end of th chapter, lol.

Anyway, let me know if you want anymore editing help an update soon!
WritingKnightmare

omg thanks for the update! :D looking forward to the next one :

Sooo, two things.

One: Sorry zi haven't reviewed up until this point! I haven't been logged in while resding your story until, well, now. Heh...

Two: I really love this story. The plot's not your typical "damsel-in-distress hot-guardian-dude" plot. :) And the mafia part is quite realistic (at least it sounds that way).

I also really like the characterization. Tori's not that steotypical anything. She's her own unique character and can't be labeled. She also is a character that, well, changes. Maybe the change isn't a 180 personality switch, but you definitely see her understanding the situation she's in a lot better as time goes on. :) Also, pissed off Agent Sumner? HOT. Like, oh my god give me an iced beverage and let me sit here in front of a giant fan hot. But besides being hot, Ryan is also his own person with his own personality quirks.
They match each other well in a way that isn't forced and that's really iimportant. I loved watching how the two gradually fell for each other and how Ryan just likes pleasing Tori with the fireworks and coffe. :)

Great story so far! I hope Ryan doesn't go to kick some mafioso ass, cuz, well, he'd probavly lose, it being 1 to like 100 armed men... heh.

Omg you can't leave me hanging! I hate it when Ryan tries to be a noble idiot and stays away from Tori. I'm excited for her rescue but I do hope she tries to get herself out of this sticky situation since she's such an independent woman.