Reviews for On the Run
Anonymous chapter 22 . 6/25/2013
Wow! This story has been up for a long time, I see, so I'm way behind, but it's really, really good. The plot was interesting, it's well-written, and the characters (and the romance) are more believable than what I've found in some published books! Kudos to you, this story is amazing. I hope you keep writing because you rock at it.
Dominique Diane chapter 21 . 6/6/2013
TOTALLY LOVED IT! So original and Agent Sumner being that hot, God! Excellent story! chapter 21 . 5/17/2013
I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! This was so amazing. Although my revision isn't sharing the same sentiment...

Tori and Ryan were impossible not to root for and every passing chapter just made me want to knock some sense into them even more! You wrote the characters and their feelings so well, you experienced everything they did with them. I'm so glad they ended up together!

Well I'm off to read the sequel - although I should really be going to sleep! I just can't help it... Xxx
mindreader311 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Fabulous I have read this story several times and it is one of my favorite now hurry up and finish the sequel ;)
Guest chapter 22 . 4/23/2013
great story! haha really love ryan and tori-and i normally dislike female leads so that's a huge compliment to you. :) the dialogue was not only witty but well written too. also, i don't think i was the only one who loved tori's escape after getting a concussion and a broken finger (girl power woot!), but agent sumner was nothing short of A ;)

a sprinkle of typos, but nothing too big (eg. you used "contend" instead of "content" a few times) or distracting. kudos to you!
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 22 . 4/18/2013
fantabulous xx
brinalovesyouxx chapter 22 . 3/13/2013
Omg i love this story! It kept me on my toes each chapter and i loved everything that happened.. Maybe not the torturing part but when Tori kicked their asses during her escape... I 3 Tori and Ryan... Such an awesome couple
now i should read On The Run..
Keep up the awesome work! :D xx
Guest chapter 21 . 3/10/2013
the moral of the story? DONT LET GUYS KISS YOU IN THE BACK ALLEY OF A CLUB. jk but seriously this story was so good! I loved it so much! you have a talent for writing!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
you know, this johnny character has seemed fishy to me from the moment he hurt tori when he shook her hand...
Guest chapter 22 . 2/27/2013
I love this story! I'm slightly disappointed that the sequel isnt focused on Ryan and Tori, but I'm still enjoying it :)
GoldenBaby96 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I LOVED this story. It was such a good story. Oh ma gosh im lost for words. As i said before, loved this story and im personally not one for adventure.
lollipop addict chapter 22 . 2/26/2013
Hey! I really really like this story, and now I'm going straight to the sequel.
Becca chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
I love How Stuff Works Podcasts. They are simply the best/ really informative
toffeema chapter 22 . 2/10/2013
I loved this story - and especially the characters! Tori was sweet and hillarious! I love these, mystery, action-packed romances. Thanks for keeping your story up! :)
Aradia Cloud chapter 4 . 2/7/2013
No lie; I love this story. At this point, I don't even care if it doesn't have a happy ending, I'd still love it.
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