Reviews for On the Run |
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Devilish Kisses chapter 5 . 12/12/2012 PinterestLife. Nuff said. Furthermore, I am very entertained by this story! Can't wait for the romance bit to happen :) |
Bookworm-At-Starbucks chapter 21 . 12/11/2012 GIRL! I have to say this is one of those really cool endings that I read on this site and what more icy cool is a date at a shooting range? Love it, you're one of those authors who has awesome work on here, and I think after you put the word "Complete" on this story - like at the blurb or something - more viewers and reviews will be coming in. So expect spam in your inbox! |
Carmel March chapter 21 . 12/10/2012 That was...perfect. I might go into a period of mourning until the sequel comes, though, because I am going to miss Ryan and Tori so much! I loved the way you wrapped this all up - it was simple, cute, and gave us a sense of closure. I am really, really looking forward to the sequel (it's about Olivia, right?). Thank you so much for sharing this amazinnggg story with us! :) |
Midnight113 chapter 21 . 12/10/2012 Aw, perfect ending! I'm so gonna miss this, really fantastic story - well done! |
funnechick chapter 21 . 12/9/2012 Loved it! I just love them together! And the peanut butter and the spoon bit...hilarious! :) Sequel...huh? Can't wait. ;) |
Elise Cromwell chapter 21 . 12/9/2012 Does this mean it's over? ;( I loved every second of this story while it lasted. Any time I got an update notification, my heart would jump in my throat and I'd have to stop and read it right there! Thank you for this piece of wonderfulness. :D |
Anaeli chapter 21 . 12/9/2012 3 |
imperfectlyokay chapter 21 . 12/8/2012 I found this story right back when you started writing it, and I was sure that I'd put it on story alert and since I hadnt received anything I figured you'd given up on it. Luckily, I was browsing around for a story to read and found it again! Your characters were fantastic. Tori's personality and voice are so distinctive. Jeremy Rhider brought out a lot of hate in me. I think her escape was a little implausible, but it was still a good escape. I suck at writing action scenes, so you did a lot better with that than I would have done. Overall a completely awesome story and you totally deserve all your reviews and the thing on A Drop Of Romeo (not sure what that is but I'm going to check it out now!) Wishing that I could write like you! |
MissColly chapter 21 . 12/8/2012 I am a little sad about this story ending but I thought it was absolutely perfect from start to finish. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful ideas and writing talents with us, I truly am grateful. I really won't be surprised if I happen to pick this story up at the library in the next couple of years because your work is truly publish-worthy. I'm a little glad about this story ending because now you can focus more on your other story which seems like it's going to be just as amaaaaazing as this one! |
Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling chapter 21 . 12/7/2012 Ack, now I need to get over the fact that this story has ended. *blinks in a daze* THIS WAS (and is) AMAZING, THANK YOU! |
heal me forever chapter 21 . 12/7/2012 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww seriously i totally enjoyed dis beautiful stry always :) cant wait for d sequel if u write it anyway i am in love wid dem thanks for dis sharing dis amazing stry wid us i teasure dis one :) God bless (: |
jjazmin chapter 21 . 12/7/2012 oh my god :( i cant believe it's done. but you did such an awesome job and i honestly cant remember how many times i've read this story all over again. thank you! and i'm looking forward to more stories in the future :D cheers! |
Thess2002 chapter 21 . 12/7/2012 Wow! Sooo good. Loved the ending, and that it was not too cliché. This story has been a terrific ride, and I just wanted to thank you so much for sharing it with us. You are an awesome writer and I am really looking forward to reading more from you! |
austenqueen chapter 21 . 12/6/2012 I LOVED this story. Sad to see it go, but it was all worth it (: |
Guest chapter 21 . 12/6/2012 Yay! |