*sigh* I'm content. Finally, they aren't at each others throats. A sequel would be much appreciated ;) Overall, extremely good story, I'm so glad I decided to click on it and give it a try. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!

Loved this story! I kinda wish you would just leave it as is and not add on a sequel because it's perfect already haha But if you do write a sequel I'm sure I won't be able to resist and end up reading that too haha

I have such a huge smile on my face right now. I actually thought the last chapter was the end, which made me sad because I thought they had some life left in them and then you showed up with this chapter. And now I'm content. I think this was the perfect thing for them to do! Can't wait to see what you do next. Super excited for the sequel! :)

Perfect.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek. Okay, so I know like, ten others reviewed today, but Im gonna take partial credit for this coming out today. Since I blew sunshine at you and shizz, and who doesn't like sunshine up their noses?
Anywho, I like the ending - short as it may be. Because it was so them. And it's a forgivable shortness of losing that who is the shmexy Ryan, because you said your thinking "sequel". And I love sequels of sexy FBI men haha
Wonderful as always!
Your Incredibly Snobby&Smug Avidly Addicted Reader,
Cara

Tory and Ryan do make a cute couple. I like his idea of having a date at a shooting range. Looking forward to the sequel.

*Sigh* Well... We all know what this means... LET'S READ IT AGAIN :D
But seriously, this has probably become one of my absolute favorite stories.
Thank you so much for creating these amazing characters and this wonderful story.

So cute. I think that was a good chapter to end it on, and cannot wait to see where you take the sequel (whenever that may happen) :)

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Love this chapter. I think it's good that you don't drag it on; it's best stopping right here. I'm looking forward to the sequel, but now, I'm going to be waiting for an Andi in Arcadia update! ;)

OMGG ITS OVERRR :) but they're so perfect together! :) so will there be a sequel then?

So after reading the updated break up plan chapter, I came to see if I ever had left a review - which I hadn't. This is probably why I kept finding chapter 20 open on my iPhone's Internet screen - It was to remind me to review...which didn't work haha. I want to give you feedback, stuff that will make you think: yeah, that totally helps my writing!
But I can only blow sunshine up your nose (my art teacher used to call non-constructive criticism like: love it keep doing what you do! Sunshine). But that's because you write with such lifelike "this could totally happen in reality" and your story is so good that I don't think there's anything to fix...besides longer chapters...or more Ryan. But that could just be my obsession talking.
Anywhos, wonderful as always, sorry for way late review!
Your Avidly Obsessed Reader,
Cara

Update?

So far - so good. I usually fold after 3 chaps (short attention span), but this story is keeping me interested - good one! And there are several more to go b4 I catch up to u.

Can't wait until update. Great read.