Absolutely loved it, I feel like this tension between them has really been building up to this point. I love how he just appeared, that he admitted everything he felt (took him long enough, ;) and I loved that ending scene, brilliant! Nothing makes me happier than true confessions of the heart, and this one felt genuine and real. Fantastic job!

i REALLY like the ending you put in, but do you think you can also update another chapter as a sort of after story...?

YAY! THEY"RE FINALLY TOGETHER! Needless to say, I love them together. And the writing is great. I really like your style. I don't know how long the story is going to continue, if I had my way it would continue forever, but keep writing! And update soon!

Yay! He admits his feelings. This couple deserves the cute moments together since all they've been through. Looking forward to your next update.

Aww, fluff! I love the description of his kiss as 'rough and sure', very nice.

I think the last few chapters could do with a bit of tightening, but that's just a last minute editing thing. I struggle when people do the 'I love you' stuff, but that's just me and my weird aversion to that proclamation!

So, yeah, awesome and I'm so happy for them! Thanks so much for writing this. If you'd ever like some help with an edit, please sing out.

Cheers!

Okay, how did I miss this chapter?! I got all excited by an update, then, when I started reading it, realised I must have missed one. Weird.

Anyway, I'm so glad the podcasts came back into play, that remains one of my favourite things about them. And then the link to how she can't stand her garbage disposal because of them. Great linkage.

It's nice to see her back with her friends and getting a bit of normalcy back as well. Haha, I live in fear of repeating names, you can sometimes get one just stuck in your head, can't you?!

Onwards to the next chapter!

Aw, everything's falling right into place! This was really cute and I'm so happy Ryan and Tori are good again with each other :)

Ali

You're still gonna update right? Great chapter. It took them long enough. Haha.

Still you're reader,
Clawstrike590

great update!

The word that I think describes this chapter the best is tentative. Because right up to the very end, I feel like that is exactly how Tori might be feeling. Maybe even Ryan...
I need to scream, but once again, thanks for an awesome story!

Aww! I knew that Ryan would man up sometime! :D

Amazing Chapter. :) Update soon.

Excellent! Finally! It's about Time! (there are many more exclamations possible here, but it's early, I'm still waking up, and I think that you get the idea.

Soooo... Just because you're in the Best HeT Incomplete winner's bracket doesn't actually mean that you can't complete the story... right?

nice one very GOOD one but always des type of chapters leads to very BAD chapters ..:( so ya cant wait update soon

Yay! I've been waiting for this to happen a long time now, it was just as I hoped! Love it and I hope you update again soon!

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