Clear phone-bombed. I love it! And the magic/psychic system as well. Glad to see it finally explained. It's actually quite elegant.

More Clear, please! You need to do a picture of him/it sometime.

And I love reading Mira. She's definitely one of your cooler characters. Though I bet writing for Riva is a blast to write for too.

Miki has already formed a group with the two girls she met all but ten minutes ago, way to go girl. Everytime I hear the name red I keep thinking of pokemon however, I'm guessing it actually is just an alias.

One quick thought, this sentence sounds a little awkward:

Did you think I was a liar? - I think it should be either, 'Did you think I was lying?' or 'Do you think I'm a liar'. Well having said that you probably no better than me so I'll shut up.

*Runs away*

Two more characters enter the scene. I sure hope my pitiful brain can store all these new additions. Gotta love miki's ever existing carefree nature. I was kinda hoping miki would say something like maybe the spirit attacks idiots instead, just to put nex in his place.

I like some of the narration and miki's love for interrupting what seemed to be a ghost story with such trivial points. Mr annoying was very easily thrown off however.

So Nex is not that well liked? I'm expecting a holier than thou kind of character then. I just wonder what race this guy is going to be and how miki is going to deal with him.

Nuu, these mysteries! They're killing me!

Ah, Aria is a sly one. And she says that she was once human? And that the fall of the Old Central caused her mutation? Whether that's true or not, I'll have to find out...

Zero puts a lot of faith in Tsuki. I'm not worried for the latter, since the former said that he always comes out victorious side. probably at the end. Right now, Tsuki's just proving Zero wrong xD

Miki and Clear once more! The Puppeteer- just who could it be? And the Seer's Cult? Could the Heartbreak Spirit be a member of them?

Will read more tomorrow! ;D

Heartbreak Spirit?! Ghosts?! Puppeteer?! *commences meltdown*

Things... are getting rather complicated. But that's good! I just hope that it won't become overwhelmingly complicated, enough to even deter me away or, more likely, keep me confused and baffled as to what is happening! But don't listen to this rant. I'm sure that I've digressed all of this information in my attic-like mind. *nods* x3

Besides, I like complicated sometimes. Puzzles, mainly. The Puppeteer, huh? Interesting. And ghosts? Double interesting!

And hallo! Who's that stranger in that short scene? Full-blooded demon? Maybe he's after Aria. Vampire hunter!

Miki's going to endure some trial(s)? Ah, I hope the Puppeteer won't be that mean...

Will read more! ;D

And the guardian drones attack! Miki and Eterno get separated- all this is quite ominous. I suppose that the action starts now, eh?

More Zero and Mira. Wait- eh? Random place full of food? I see... and Zero seems to be quite the mastermind. He's planned everything out, for sure. Everything, except for the results. I like how the MikiEterno combo has him puzzled. I mean, anything could happen with those two xD

And no! Miki! And hallo! A new charrie! I wonder who this is. Will he play a big part in this mystery?!

Will read more! ;D

DIZO IS THE DIMENSIONAL GOD, I KNOW IT.
POETIC GIRL IS MIN, I KNOW IT.
ZERO KNOWS ABOUT THE WHOLE DIZO/DIZONE THING, I KNOW IT.
ARIA IS A DOMINATRIX, I KNO- *is shot*

Welp! Well, those are all my speculations so far. I must say, DZ! is turning out to be quite the mystery novel. I like it x3

More Miki and Eterno, and I like how the two have that 'opposites attract' vibe. And-! their antics are very entertaining! ;)

Oho, Tsuki and Aria time. Precisely why I mistook Aria as a dominatrix *is shot* Although, their scene together is rather serious in a way, and I like how Aria keeps her cool with her expressive speech pattern, whilst Tsuki is just flat-out forward.

Too bad that Tsuki fell prey to her. *shudders*

Eterno's Talent?! Me want to know what it is!

Will read more! ;D

More revelations. I LIKE IT.

Ah, Zero is a smart cookie. Smart in terms of knowledge. I'm sure Mira probably can't compete with that, but then again, she seems to be rather smart in a witty fashion. x3

The Golden Blacksmith, eh? Along with the Heartbreak Spirit as well? Gah, I'm thinking that poetic-Min-girl is the Spirit, since she's crying and all. And the Blacksmith... I suppose I'll find out.

Dizone is the Dimensional God? *looks at Dizo* Yep, it all makes sense. In fact, that could be Zero's first secret that he entrusted to Mira. I'm betting it is, anyway.

And Dizo... that pendant again. Really, now. All the more reason why he seems to be a god, and a sort of Doctor Who character *is shot*

Will read more! ;D

Yey, more Miki and Eterno! The two make a good pair together, and I only say that because their pure comic relief x3

Ah, an explanation of what a Talent is. Been wondering about that for a while. So Talents are recycled when someone dies? Oh, w-wow... I kinda copied the idea by accidentally, as evident in my Reikon VS Zero piece. orz

Oh well. Things happen. Just like in the story! Miki has an unregistered Talent?! I hope it's something awesome!

Zero and Mira... they make quite a pair. *prepares to ship the two *is shot**

But wait, then who's Aria with?

Will read more! ;D

Aww damn. I thought that the poetry girl was Nex! How could I be so blind! I'm a shame to amateur detectives everywhere! *hides under bed*

But well. I'm guessing that it's Min. Why? 'The tears started to come again'- she had tears when she sent a letter to Nex before, right? Right? *recedes back under the bed*

Old Central, eh? Sounds intriguing. And that Aria lady is back... and with one of the Demonico. Zero, perhaps? If so, the daaammmmn.

Poor Selena. You ignored her for a while and just wrote the whole chapter without her! *is shot* But well, you probably have a good reason for that x3

Will read more! ;D

Ah, I feel bad for Eterno. Miki sure can be a handful...

Great introduction to the Demonico. I like how they have different personalities, too. Zero's starting to sound very cliche, and I'm only saying that because of his hair color. Why iss everyone named Zero have some sort of white, silvery hair? From Loli's Zero to Vampire Knight's Kiryu Zero, it's getting a bit old. *is shot*

But oh well. Nice jacket, though. ;D

Another phase has passed. (2) required Zero to divulge in his speculations, though that wasn't entirely true. Fai did, really. But I was close!

Vampires, huh? And Selena- no! That teacher really isn't qualified... scary.

Will read more! ;D