Didn't expect to see them so soon. This should be interesting...

We're basically 20 chapters ahead in a story whose advance has been 24 hours... but I as a fellow short-chapter writer know 1,000 words is relatively short. Short is nice, though (*w*)b

And Mikiiiiiiii what secret are you hiding? Plus her method are just... er... unusual.

I forgot to review last chapter QAQ

Interesting. Does this have something to do with Eterno, or the Golden Blacksmith?

The light-heartedness of this story is surely amusing...
As for smart, well, sure.

I know who the heartbreak spirit is! I know! It's- *killed by pedobear*

"But she had willpower." Indeed she had.

As for going against the law by wearing clothes... we'll see, we'll see *-*

Too bad I got spoiled who the heartbreak spirit is... tourney whyyy QAQ

Miki is... Miki is so freakishly smart. As for Red and Mira, they sound alright, but no more tan any other character sounds. Maybe they'll stand out more in future chapters.

I really liked this chapter. A little cooldown between the action, and well-done exposition for how the school works. It seems simple enough, though now I'm curious as to how (or if) inter-wing interactions work. Like, do they have sporting events between the different wings? Do common clubs (like, say, the history clubs) between wings sometimes collaborate? It's such a large world, and 52 chapters in we barely know how a lot of the school stuff works, and now I'm all curious and stuff.

Still need to work on your telling, i.e. the romance of competition got Miki fired up, and such.

Oooohhh... I didn't think of romantic elements while reading this. So that's why it's called "Heartbreak".

That's sad though. Being forgotten by someone you love and- okay, I'll stop here.

Feels chapter coming up!

Oh welcome back, Eterno. Been a long time since you appeared haha!

Okay finally the stage is set. Time to know who the Heartbreak Spirit is!

Heeeee... I thought Miki is going to tell something really important to Selena during that night, but whatever. I approve of Miki x Selena. *shot

I'm still sticking with my guess. Nex is the Heartbreak Spirit! ;)

Awwww Selena got mad... That was cute... Uuuuuuu(tilde)

Haha! And finally, the plot thickens. Hoping for a good conclusion for this arc! XD

Awwwww... Selena is so cute. I like her now. Such timid character... X3

Hah! Nex is the Heartbreak Spirit! I guess. *shot

I... I want cake. orz

Sentence-structure is good, and prose flows like caramel. It's funny how Mira stole the cake, especially since she strikes me as being the mature type. And Miki, despite her objection to stealing, ate the stolen goods anyway! I would've eaten them, stolen or not (I'm such a glutton *sweat drop*).

Yey, more antics! And good on you Mira, for suspecting that Selena probably ISN'T the Spirit! You could be wrong, but hey-! you might not be!

Ah, Red is the team leader for this mission? I see, I see. I hope she doesn't astronomically stuff it up. *is shot by said character*

Where's Eterno, by the way?

Will read more soon! ;D

Spirit Squadron, GOOO!

Ah, I love chapters like these. Lighthearted. Jovial. Nakama-ish. Seriously, I'm afraid that your style of writing will make me cry someday *grabs a tissue box*

The trio are quite awesome together with their diverse personalities. Red is cool, and Mira is quite awesome with her maturity. And as always, Miki is fantastic in terms of her spirited nature. Together they make the awesome Spirit Squadron!

Also, sneaky move at mentioning the team name at the end of the chapter. I took the bait *sweat drop*

Will read more! ;D

Selena is a trickster! Oh well. Tis' a shame that she fell prey to the Dark Side... unless she isn't the Heartbreak Spirit. *dun dun!*

And hallo! More characters! Red and Ponytail! Looks like they were the ones who were vandalized (that Selena!). It's funny how they burst into the scene and cause quite a commotion. Actually, Red is the one who did that, so...

I wonder what the next chapter could be. Miki was targeted by the Spirit, yet she has awful grades. What could this entail?!

You sent a short story to some publishers, Kisho? Really? Good to hear! Personally, I like your weird but wonderful style x3

Will read more! ;D