First nitpick of the day: the lack of question marks! Wut happened to those[?] *points at that queston mark*

But yes, it's good to see that Eterno isn't just a brooding guy with no emotion. It's funny how he reacts to the information and the professor laughs at him. You incorporate some mystery there, and I'm excited to see what this activation is!

Prose is simple. You use phrases and repetition to make up for lost description, and give that sort of... fairytale feel. To me, anyway! And I'm referring to that 'billion yen' motif-sort-of-thing. Not many people can employ that, and I think that it could be what sets your writing apart x3

Miki's a secret agent now, huh? She strikes me as being incapable of spy work, but then again the world works in mysterious ways...

And how did the professor find out that Miki's spying on Eterno? Did the principal tell him? (This is why the staff lounge can be dangerous! *is bound and gagged*)

Will read more! ;D

That eerie like poem at the end sure left a strong impact, shame I'm not such a deep thinker that I can actually understand it. Those Councillors were discussing something I also don't get but, My cud senses tell me it's a conspiracy. Eterno seems to have become a little more open with miki now which is nice to see. So many mysteries coming up so quickly, I look forward to the answers coming up. Oh just one question from the guy who doesn't have a clue, what exactly is a Demigod by definition? - I thought it was the same thing as a half demon, but.

Oh, a very lighthearted, jovial sort of prose! Almost like you're writing in third-person deep POV, only that you write it happily x3

Miki seems to be a nice person, and I can relate to her a lot with the daydreaming *daydreams about shounen fights in Science *is shot** I wonder if Miki is based on what you perceive yourself as a person. Maybe it's the deep POV talking *ehe*

I won't nitpick on description; prose makes up for that. Simple. Concise. That adds some sort of vagueness to the scene, like... mystery. And I like mystery.

So the famous Eterno, huh? Interesting...

1000 words every chapter? That's fine with me! Although, I will (try to) compensate by reading past your shorter chapters, assuming that you have longer chapters. ;3

Will read more! ;D

I figured that would be the case. From secret agent to detective Miki is a very busy body. Now lets see if she can drag eterno in as her own personal 'Watson' I'm guessing that I am hoping for too much though. But wouldn't miki's parents etc be worried that their daughter has just been spirited away? Do first think second is the virtue of every good main character.

Chapter 4 Review (Apparently I already reviewed it; me can't remember however. So I'm putting it here.)

The tease of a principal. But taste like coffee? What an impression. But I'm curious as to how Miki managed to guess correctly that he was a demon. The girl is a huge unknown right now. But smint premise to a smint series. My memory is beginning to refresh now. But I'm still surprised eterna didn't get a slap to his face, although miki didn't seem to care at all.

Chapter 5 Review:

Miki not being afraid of death but more interested in what it feels like to be dead was quite good. I wonder what that spirit thing was. I'm looking forward to the mixed cultures of all the many different worlds

Anyway I think I noticed one minor typo if I'm not mistaken:
You'll see, won't you? One Eterno takes you there - I think the 'one' is meant to be 'once'

Loved miki's quick report of adding the segment of her ordering ice cream, that part made me smile slightly. But despite eterno blushing with intense emotion before he is really clueless to the feelings of others. Confrontation between half demon and half delusional next chapter. Which shall be read right now!

Secret agent Miki! Bring out the shades, cigar and suit! "Do you expect me to talk?"

Sorry, couldn't help myself.

One quick question but how would you describe half demon horns? Just putting that didn't tell me a lot unfortunately, are they big, small, straight, curly or what?

But kudos to the principle for saying the right things to push Miki's buttons.

Gonna start right from the beginning. To refresh my horrible memory. The thought of Miki escaping into her daydreams to me is reminding me a little of the beginning of Marchen awakens romance with a mixture of haruhi in hating the norm. Your writing itself is very well done, my little eye couldn't spot a single error. One quick question, when you are writing people's names which do you personally put first? The surname first (Japanese way) or given name (our way)? In other words is Miki the heroines forename or is Emiko?

Well I guess it doesn't really matter.

I wish for Miki to end up in the South hahaha, but nahh I'll see about that soon. Probably.

Surely she won't be kicked out because of some sort of turn of events. I'll expect that. XD

Ohooooo this is sooooo exciting. I can't wait to hear what the DZ is like! Or why it's raining!

Eeeek excuse me while I fan-girl! Can I enter DZ and have Eterno kiss me!? Please?! Someone?!

xDD I finally started on this, Kisho-nee! I can't say anything yet but, the writing sure gives off vibrant and energetic feelings... well the writing itself seems like Miki-chan! XD
I'll definitely try to catch up during this summer vacation! XD

The story is well underway indeed! Here we go! Miki is cute. Now look for an Eterno/Miki fan art. Can't wait to see where this goes Kisho-nyachan!

I feel bad reviewing this first chapter because that would break your five hundred reviews. . .

But anyway. This was great! I loved it sooo much! Miki is so cute and bubbly. Totally doing a fan art of her soon XD