Reviews for DZ! |
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YelloMage Iero chapter 2 . 3/10/2013 Eterno seems wary about this "activation." Which means it's obviously going to be interesting. ;) The whole scenario you have running here is really interesting me... Well, I'll just go through and read the next chapter of Secret Agent Miki's escapades... -w-b |
YelloMage Iero chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 ...I feel like an idiot for not coming to read this sooner. Anyways, you've very quickly established both a setting and each character's personality. The way you write your prose is very professional, and I'm certainly keeping an eye on this story. |
Katsurou Shimizu chapter 58 . 3/9/2013 Finally, the chapter that reveals the mystery behind the missing class! ["I have permission to do whatever I like, all the time!"] - Sure you do (monotone) Hahahaha, never thought that Miki would meet her match in conversation killers. Makes for more interesting character interaction in the future chapters (especially when Gen gives me the impression that he doesn't know anything about cards). Time to pick up sign language, girl! |
Justrockzyxxx chapter 58 . 3/9/2013 Great chappy! :) |
Justrockzyxxx chapter 57 . 3/3/2013 Brilliant chapter :) |
Ryou Arubin chapter 22 . 2/26/2013 Haha. I actually had the same theory as Miki before she entered Nex's room in my mind. I am glad that they managed to resolve the issue nicely. With Seleana finally eased and joining the Spirit Squadron. (And Nex whining about cleaning. Heh, talk about karma.) Whatt? That message wasn't done by Nex? I will just throw in a crack theory and say that it's done by Zero (or one of the secretive Council members.) |
Ryou Arubin chapter 21 . 2/26/2013 Oo, after reading his motive, I really sympathize with Nex. But... meh. He should have done this in a honest way, by putting his best effort to become the top student. ...Half-right? What do you mean it's half-right, Zero? You mean there's still more to it?! And what's that something that's bothering Nex? Onto the next chapter! |
Ryou Arubin chapter 20 . 2/26/2013 Yep, saw it coming! That's one hell of a past. |
Ryou Arubin chapter 19 . 2/26/2013 :o how did things ended up like that?! I have thought it would be a confrontation just between the Spirit Squadron and the Heartbreak Spirit! Either way, great job in setting the stage up. DZ! is getting really unpredictable (at least for me). Oo a new character, Zero. Eterno sure has a lot of connections. Just a suggestion. Perhaps when you are free, you could hold a character popularity poll for DZ! and maybe, you could do up a illustration depicting who won the popularity poll and their rank? I am really intrigued to see how they all looked like XD |
Ryou Arubin chapter 18 . 2/26/2013 *Acting like Red* "Dammit! Stop reading for almost a year and you are forced back to square/chapter one again." *Reverts back to self* Helloo! It's been almost a year since I have read DZ! When I try to pick up from where I left off last time, everything appears to be confusing . . Therefore, I decided to start anew from chapter 1 and here I am! Hmm, my gut feeling tells me that the part regarding the moon would be important in the next chapter or so. Although I just can't seem to deduce how it would be important... Miki definitely knows who the Heartbreak Spirit is. And you are doing a great job with her character for this chapter. How she goes about handling the issue. Ehehe, unless you pull off a twist in the next chapter or so, I think I know who the Heartbreak Spirit is! |
Katsurou Shimizu chapter 56 . 2/24/2013 Congratulations on your 400th review! Cheers to another 100 more! (actually read this already, but didn't review because I didn't know what to say but the 399th mark was too irresistible... so just to say something...) I FAIL at being a decipherer. And get well soon. Of course. |
Y. S. Wong chapter 12 . 2/23/2013 lol. Miki is better at being annoying than Nex is! And more details about the Heartbreak Spirit at last! *I will catch up one day! That glorious day is far and distant and further than the sky, but I shall get there!* |
Y. S. Wong chapter 11 . 2/23/2013 Happy 18th birthday, Ki-tan! Oh wait. Well, good chapter nonetheless! *slowly catching up* |
Justrockzyxxx chapter 56 . 2/23/2013 Hope you get well soon! Great chapter! |
TheSexyBloodEdge chapter 55 . 2/18/2013 "From: Zero "Hello Eterno" "I just realized how Fermat's theorem applies to my friendly number situation" "Cool huh" Fermat... Do I smell incoming plot thread? Seems like an important character... Or am I just overthinking things? |