Reviews for DZ! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Eterno seems wary about this "activation." Which means it's obviously going to be interesting. ;) The whole scenario you have running here is really interesting me... Well, I'll just go through and read the next chapter of Secret Agent Miki's escapades... -w-b |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I feel like an idiot for not coming to read this sooner. Anyways, you've very quickly established both a setting and each character's personality. The way you write your prose is very professional, and I'm certainly keeping an eye on this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, the chapter that reveals the mystery behind the missing class! ["I have permission to do whatever I like, all the time!"] - Sure you do (monotone) Hahahaha, never thought that Miki would meet her match in conversation killers. Makes for more interesting character interaction in the future chapters (especially when Gen gives me the impression that he doesn't know anything about cards). Time to pick up sign language, girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chappy! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. I actually had the same theory as Miki before she entered Nex's room in my mind. I am glad that they managed to resolve the issue nicely. With Seleana finally eased and joining the Spirit Squadron. (And Nex whining about cleaning. Heh, talk about karma.) Whatt? That message wasn't done by Nex? I will just throw in a crack theory and say that it's done by Zero (or one of the secretive Council members.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oo, after reading his motive, I really sympathize with Nex. But... meh. He should have done this in a honest way, by putting his best effort to become the top student. ...Half-right? What do you mean it's half-right, Zero? You mean there's still more to it?! And what's that something that's bothering Nex? Onto the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, saw it coming! That's one hell of a past. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :o how did things ended up like that?! I have thought it would be a confrontation just between the Spirit Squadron and the Heartbreak Spirit! Either way, great job in setting the stage up. DZ! is getting really unpredictable (at least for me). Oo a new character, Zero. Eterno sure has a lot of connections. Just a suggestion. Perhaps when you are free, you could hold a character popularity poll for DZ! and maybe, you could do up a illustration depicting who won the popularity poll and their rank? I am really intrigued to see how they all looked like XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Acting like Red* "Dammit! Stop reading for almost a year and you are forced back to square/chapter one again." *Reverts back to self* Helloo! It's been almost a year since I have read DZ! When I try to pick up from where I left off last time, everything appears to be confusing . . Therefore, I decided to start anew from chapter 1 and here I am! Hmm, my gut feeling tells me that the part regarding the moon would be important in the next chapter or so. Although I just can't seem to deduce how it would be important... Miki definitely knows who the Heartbreak Spirit is. And you are doing a great job with her character for this chapter. How she goes about handling the issue. Ehehe, unless you pull off a twist in the next chapter or so, I think I know who the Heartbreak Spirit is! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on your 400th review! Cheers to another 100 more! (actually read this already, but didn't review because I didn't know what to say but the 399th mark was too irresistible... so just to say something...) I FAIL at being a decipherer. And get well soon. Of course. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. Miki is better at being annoying than Nex is! And more details about the Heartbreak Spirit at last! *I will catch up one day! That glorious day is far and distant and further than the sky, but I shall get there!* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy 18th birthday, Ki-tan! Oh wait. Well, good chapter nonetheless! *slowly catching up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you get well soon! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() "From: Zero "Hello Eterno" "I just realized how Fermat's theorem applies to my friendly number situation" "Cool huh" Fermat... Do I smell incoming plot thread? Seems like an important character... Or am I just overthinking things? |