Reviews for DZ!
cud-b-better chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
Despite her low grades miki seems to be pretty smart regarding somethings. I guess she works hard in things that truly interest her. I'm looking forward to seeing the ending of this great mystery. I wonder if eterno is going to make another appearance soon.
kingofe3 chapter 67 . 11/30/2013
Hmm, I guess that was meta, a way for you to tell us this is where the adventure comes to a halt. Man, right before the action starts. I was actually liking what was going on so far too. U.U

Anyway, thank you for letting me plow through DZ!, Kisho. I enjoyed what I was able to read. I wish you luck on your rewrite! :D
kingofe3 chapter 66 . 11/30/2013
Gen speaks in sentences. owo I really wonder how they'll take the cards from them, as they seem to have a high class atmosphere about themselves.
kingofe3 chapter 65 . 11/30/2013
Ohmai... is Eterno getting jealous of the Zero x Mira train? Oho indeed. *w*

Oh, Aria, you cunning vampyr you.
kingofe3 chapter 64 . 11/30/2013
So Gen either has the Talent of persuasion or has a Talent that can turn him into a monster. Very much looking forward to his Talent.
kingofe3 chapter 63 . 11/30/2013
Ah, the good teasing of Eterno. Can we just imagine him blushing like a school girl? -w-

Clear must have been listening in or something. Suspicious...
kingofe3 chapter 62 . 11/30/2013
Hmm, Clear again... I'm sorry for forgetting these characters you love writing so much. Guess Mira is trying to hack him. I like his/she/it's eccentric dialogue, hopefully we can see more of him soon.

More hints at that Miki X Eterno ship. ;)
kingofe3 chapter 61 . 11/30/2013
Talent agitation? Hmm, very interesting. Some really interesting foreshadowing with Miki... and by that I mean dark.

Miki, no means no. Respect Gen's personal space now. U.U

I didn't know Mira was a hacker.
kingofe3 chapter 60 . 11/30/2013
Hmm, me thinks Dizo texted Miki. I mean, his name shorten could reach that.

I don't know how I like more, Gen or Riva. They compliment each other well with Miki.
kingofe3 chapter 59 . 11/30/2013
Not sure why Miki would ask a store clerk on finding cards. Guess it wasn't her brightest idea. w

So that's Aria plan, huh? Cunning woman, she is. This makes me wonder what everyone's talent is now.
kingofe3 chapter 58 . 11/30/2013
When Aria first mentioned the three group thing, I too thought Elly and Selena would group up with Miki. Surprise, surprise, as you took this new opportunity to introduce new characters (minor or nah?)

Their... interesting to say the least. I imagine Gen speaking like an Indian for some odd reason. And oh boy, Riva is a riot.
kingofe3 chapter 57 . 11/30/2013
Um... Zero x Silla? Lol

Sorry, I almost forgot who Mira was. (Doesn't remember much). More codec messaging!

Um... not much else to say to be honest.
kingofe3 chapter 56 . 11/30/2013
A bit hard to read some parts of this chapter along with the info given, but it was a good chapter nonetheless. (Doesn't really have much to say since other reviews have highlighted it already)

I wonder if we're going to see more of Zero's personal side. ._./
kingofe3 chapter 55 . 11/30/2013
Lol at that coded message Zero sent Eterno. "c001 huh" should be a meme now. I barely understood what it meant btw.

The headmaster... nope, can't imagine what he looks like even with your description of him. I don't reckon Aria would plan anything so quickly with her classmates, probably the beginning of her plan or something.

Oh boy, did Eterno walk in on someone changing? /shot for lame prediction
kingofe3 chapter 54 . 11/30/2013
Aria still up to no good it seems, even bringing Elly into the mix. As someone who wrote her dialogue before, I hope whatever happens won't hurt her. /writing sympathy U.U
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