Reviews for DZ!
DevilPogoStick chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
I like the interaction with Miki and Selena, really gives some heartwarmish moment in there because of Miki's...Uh, friendshipness!

And...I feel sad because of the ending, what will happen to Selena?! :(

Keep it up!
DevilPogoStick chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
lol, the interactions.

"I wasn't paying attention because you're boring!" ...Smooth Miki.

"Like Hell that Weirdo's my girilfriend!" ...Never mind, Eterno kind of had that coming now, call him boring all you want Miki. XD

Keep it up!
cmaej chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
Lol... set up.

Yeah, that principal is an odd one, keeping students late after school and not considering the parents.

I kind of feel bad for Shiori. Hopefully, she makes an appearance later in your story.
DevilPogoStick chapter 7 . 11/29/2013
Eterno, such a jerk XD.

G looks to be a very interesting. Hope to see more of G soon. :)

the ending...Was surprising really. O_o

Keep it up!
cmaej chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
A professor tormenting a student and a smexy principal who sends a student to spy on another. The faculty is an interesting group, and we're not even at Central Academy, yet. I wonder what comes next.
DevilPogoStick chapter 6 . 11/29/2013
Ho ho...And Miki decides to do thing her way...This is gonna be interesting. :)

And Eterno...Dude, you have to realize this is Miki you're talking about XD

And will this Heartbreak Spirit be an actual ghost? Damn this is fun already!

Keep it up!
cmaej chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Of course, Eterno will show interest in our main character. Where will the story go if he didn't? ;)

You introduced the character pretty well in such a short chapters. The first part was a good way to give your readers an idea of the story's premise without a long prologue.

Your thousand-word chapter every week is an interesting technique. It keeps you writing without overwhelming you.
Razorine chapter 48 . 11/28/2013
*jumps out of seat* The answers are coming? Really? Really, really?

Nothing much to comment on, this is pretty much a chapter which tells of how they meet up again and so on. But yes, a speedy reunion. And they just left Aria and Elizabeth, since the two were probably hugging each other in an eternal bond ;D

Ah, the Spirit Squadron and Demonico are back to the club room! Things are becoming quite tense for me. I want answers, and I need them like water!

The whole truth? Dizo's return? The golden cylinder?!

Will read more soon! (maybe! orz) ;D
Ereh chapter 25 . 11/28/2013
Zero is an interesting character. I also like Tsuki for some reason. (wut?)

Oh my guess about the new faculty for the Zone History Club was wrong. Oh well. XD
cud-b-better chapter 15 . 11/28/2013
Off to a rocky start. Selena already pronounced guilty before she has even had a chance to defend herself. Isn't the phrase 'innocent till proven guilty'? Lot of things seem to completely disregard this concept, well I guess this is closer to human nature. But one of them is a thief, isn't that just as worse as the spirit?
Louis-sama chapter 67 . 11/28/2013
Alright, that's just meta.

*cringes*

Umm... nothing to say here, so... wish to see more from you, I guess?

Louis-sama (2013)
Louis-sama chapter 66 . 11/28/2013
Okay, that was interesting. Wondering about what's going to happen to Miki and her gang. As usual, please keep up the good work. I shall move on to the next chapter.

Louis-sama (2013)
Louis-sama chapter 65 . 11/28/2013
Well, not much is going on in this chapter, though I'd say that this is still quite a good chapter made by you. Though I'd appreciate it more if you include more... 'elaboration' in your narration, and I really hope to see more 'oomph' factors in your story to get me hooked more with the plot. Well, so far, you're doing a pretty fine job, but I know you can do better than this. Please do your best for your future chapters, and I shall move on to the next chapter.

Louis-sama (2013)
Louis-sama chapter 64 . 11/28/2013
Why do I have a feeling that this chapter is shorter than usual? Maybe it's because of your Author's note at the bottom. Well, whatever. By the way, another good chapter, despite how short it is. I only wish that I can read something more... elaborate next time, but you're doing a pretty fine job on this. So, please keep it up and good job. I shall move on to the next chapter, as usual.

Louis-sama (2013)
Louis-sama chapter 63 . 11/28/2013
Poor Eterno. Another good chapter, however short it is. Once again, shall I remind you again that I like Riva? Hahahahaha. Okay, good job for this one, and please keep it up. I shall move on to the next chapter.

Louis-sama (2013)
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