Things have slowed down in this chapter, and I'm wondering about what Selena's Talent really is. Well, as usual, I loved this chapter, despite its shortness. Please keep up the good work. I shall move on to the next chapter to see what's going to happen next. :D

Louis-sama (2013)

Alright, the beginning made me a little confused, but I guess it's okay. A little d'aww moment with Aria, and I bet there will be more shocking revelations in the next chapters. I will go on to read more, so good work.

Louis-sama (2013)

True Heartbreak Spirit, eh?

Zone History Club looks like a club for badass people and I'm already guessing who will be the substitute LOL. XD

It's been a while since the last time I read your story *is shot* but I guess this will do, for now. This chapter is pretty heartwarming, with Selena's speech that can even move the sturdiest of hearts of men. Your prose is concise and despite being short, I greatly enjoyed this. So, please keep up the good work. I shall move on to read the next chapter.

Louis-sama (2013)

Awwwwww... more Selena scenes. It makes me go d'awwwwwwwwwww!

Nex, don't say that. Cleaning is fun ahaha!

Oho, there's more to this Heartbreak Spirit?

Eh... that was an abrupt ending. Thought there would more to it.

Oh well, maybe there's actually more to it. Onto the next arc!

You and your revelations! They're amazing and annoying at the same time! (1) They are utterly unexpected and piece some of the puzzle together! (2) I didn't guess them! orz

FaiRed and ZeroMira meet! I can see the pairings now *fufufu!* and I'm excited to see where they'll go from there. More action? More suspense? More wise-talk from Zero?

Meanwhile, Aria finally enters the scene! And... she's crying? Wut? Eh?

Elizabeth is her sister?

*dumfoundedslackjawedgapesuncontrollably*

And... a red moon? Sec with his eye is looking up to it? And the regenerated Clear is looking at it oddly? Evera too? And... and... the Leader and G are looking at it too?

What does this all mean?

Will read more revelations... *still slackjawed* ;D

Ah! I could've cried in this, but it seems so pathetic to do so in my room when it's blazing hot *sweat drop*

Selena finally speaks with a true heart. It's nice to see her be brave and it's double nice that she tries to coax Elizabeth out of her empty shell, her irreplaceable mind, her broken heart. I now know why Selena was exactly the person to help Elizabeth. It's because she's experienced it too, and experience is probably a plus in the empathy department ;3

Things went so smoothly in that prose of yours. Very melodic, I must add. And somehow, somehow, I pictured everything like a Korean drama.

*is shot multiple times*

A-Aria again! She provides us a brief summary of the Puppeteer's plan! Will there be another climax? (F-Famous last dirty words? *is bound and gagged*)

Will read more! ;D

WUUUTTT?! This is-! Is this the climax already?!

Well, it was worth the wait, I guess. xD

Dizo again, huh? Hah! Whatever your plans were, they've been ruined! *is shot*

And Selena! What an unexpected surprise! I almost though that it would be Vexan, but that was just me with my wild imagination... But yes! Selena! She was the one fated to meet the Heartbreak Spirit? This is madness! Just how, and why?

And Aria knew this? Is it because she tasted Selena's blood? *is shot*

Selena... I'm glad that you've gotten a burst of confidence. You can do it! You can pull a Miki right in front of Elizabeth, for sure!

So how many masterminds are there? Dizo, Aria, Evera, Zero... uwah, too many.

Will Read more, though! ;D

Fai and Red time, finally! I was beginning to think that they were just mere, unfortunate plot devices. *is shot*

As expected, Red's shouting and Fai's trying to get her to listen. Red can be really obnoxious, and I'm saying that because I know what obnoxious is *gives sister the evil eye* But anyway, I like their chemistry already. It's quite entertaining, and provides some comic relief to the whole situation x3

They found one of the Blacksmith's items?! A cylinder, huh? Maybe it traps Talents. Or souls! *ponders*

And Miki is expressing her Talent once more. Her intuitive, instinctive Talent. Maybe... maybe she has this link with the Spirit?

And a gatecrasher. Oh. Wonderful. *gapes*

Will read more suspense! ;D

No scene breaks! *throws confetti*

Oho, a history ramble? I love these sort of things, and what's more is that these are the answers I've been waiting for! Well, part of the answers. I'm still waiting on the reason why Evera and Aria exist, but that should come in the next chapters x3

Vexan sure is cruel. And the Golden Blacksmith must be OP to the max. Vampires VS Demigods- this is quite the concept. And one vampire left?! *gives Aria the evil eye*

One thing I'd like to mention. Aria was supposedly a substitute teacher, yes? Not only that, but Dizo sent her. I think... I think our fellow professor is more deadlier than he seems. Whether he's helping Miki and the others or not, to me he's still... Dizone.

But well. That's for another time x3

Will read more! ;D

Wow! What a surprise! Somehow, I'm... not that shocked? I'm surprised, but not shocked. But that's rather crafty of you, anyway! Who knew that the poetry girl would be the Spirit? And she isn't Min. Damn. *is shot*

Tsuki's doing a good job of being Eterno's replacement as Miki's sidekick. Miki, show more of your awesomeness! *raises fist to the air*

So, how shall Miki and Tsuki approach this... this heartbroken girl?

And how will everybody else come into play?

Will read more! ;D

Still on the first arc? Geez, when will this madness end?! *is shot*

So the Puppeteer is Evera? And she's not the real Puppeteer, she's just getting orders from the real one... yet, what does she want with Eterno? Is it because he's a half-demon? *totally confused*

The plot is... way more complex than I'd ever imagined. Too complex. In fact, my brain has already gone into the mode of accepting any information and just relying on repeated morsels of information to fully comprehend the situation. That's how complex this is to me *sweat drop*

It feels like you're holding vital info back to amaze us. Sure, it's rather effective in doing the latter, but it's becoming... inconsistent. Like solving a puzzle whose image is unknown to us. That's how I feel right now, sorry ;S

Either way, I'll be really grateful for some answers in the next chapters. And I don't have the right to nitpick about all of that, since you wrote this a long time ago.

But alas! I've said too much, and not read too much. I just want to say that Sec being a member of the Seer's Cult was unexpected. Good job! *thumbs up*

Will read more! ;D

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... well, nobody would miss Clear anyway *is shot*

And just as I was about to warm up to his creepy attitude! But oh well. He is a bit of a mystery. Still, shooting himself in the head?! Yet... he wouldn't die from that, would he? He lost an arm. He didn't bleed. Surely a bullet through his forehead wouldn't kill him...

What is he?

*shudders*

Well, Tsuki's here to save Miki *yey!* So where's Aria, then?

Will read more confusion! ;D

Nuu, I may be writing shorter reviews since it's hot over here. *faces the fan*

But well, things are reaching the climax? Aria has something personal she wants to hide. Her 'b'? What could that entail? Wait... boyfriend, maybe? Could... could Aria have a bf? *shudders*

Clear with his okayness! Losing an arm isn't okay! How will you save Miki once she almost dies from Eterno being controlled by the Puppeteer?! Okay, I'm just exaggerating, I mean, that won't actually happen...
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Losing an arm isn't okay!

And the Heartbreak Spirit is finally here?! Bring it on! I-I'm ready to face the truth!

Will read more! ;D