Reviews for To Hurt
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I've never actually thought about it that way. Interesting perspective. But why would someone hurt the one they love?
theycallmetalljake chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
It was really beautiful, and i love your rhyming!

Then to the Yang comes the Yin.

The negative hatred that Hurt inflicts.

The Hurts that you feel by this one is a Sin…

The Sin, where your life and this Hurt has many conflicts.

Is my favourite part, the ending's great, too.

Sometimes your rhyming is inconsistent (well, only the 5-8ish lines) and it throws off the rhythm... but maybe that's just me... XD