Kasha is so boss. I like him already. :) And the king cracks me up, such a grouch!

On a literary note, this is an awesome opening. Interesting, memorable names and a great balance of dialogue, action, and backstory. Love it, as always. :D

This is an interesting start of a story. I'm kind of waiting for Rodan's reaction. For now, it's a bit too 1-sided so far. Still, the story looks promising :-)

Hello!

I thought I'd write a review because it's been quite a while since I've reviewed anything online, and I've realized after what you've said that it simply will not do if authors stop posting on fictionpress because of not getting reviews!

I am quite enjoying this story, and I'm looking forward to seeing what direction it'll go in. Kasha seems to be quite the interesting character, and not at all the one-sided fop that royalty is often attributed to be. I'm ever so curious about what happened in his past that is making him treat his prisoner this way!

Though I must say, I smirked a bit at his indignation at wearing women's clothing. I think any man that thinks it emasculating to wear women's clothing should be forced to wear it at least once a month, as it would be good for them :)

Women's clothing can look quite nice on a male form.

Anywho, I look forward to the next installment, as I've said, and thank you for continuing to post this on fictionpress!

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Zev

Not sure how I feel about this story- I like lady Ophelia but I don't really understand Kasha and I don't really feel sorry for Rodan either. I've been reading but not reviewing because I've been on the fence for a while. Loved Send in the Clown so I'm giving this story a shot.

I have no idea if there's been less reviews lately, as for once I've been keeping my writing to myself. However, I'm loving this story so far, even if I don't review or comment or whatever much. Perhaps your readers are like me, and lurk in the shadows, never knowing what to say in a review!

This is really good. I love your characters and how you came up with the idea of sleep deprivation as a torture meathod. I would have never thought of that! I can't wait for more so keep writing and don't stop!

When I saw this story had been posted, I squeed. Only you, Wanda, only you...

Reviewing before I even read: it's too late at night for me to read, but I'm bookmarking immediately, because, well, it's _you_.

I am intrigued...I can't wait to see where you take this :) (also, I honestly will read send in the clown again...eventually. There's just so many chapters now...bleh T~T) haha update soon :)