You, madam, cannot resist drama. Ever. D :
Also, whoa, Opheali is pregnant? Is it Kasha's? o.o When did they have sex? How long was Kasha gone again? :( Maybe I just forgot.

AGH you make me so happy and then so sad in the same chapter. Poor Kasha, ;_; I'm glad you're still writing this.

This is a perfect ending point for the night. XD I can go to sleep without screaming obscenities. XD

Cannot wait until the next chapter(s)!

Now I'm beginning to wonder if Abele will be able to get through his PTSD... At this point, I don't care who ends up with who! Just give everyone what they need to be happy! ;_;

Thank god for the lack of a cliffhanger. I'm sure my heart could take any more...

P.S. I just realized I'd been reading his name as 'Adele' instead of the proper 'Abele' this entire time. OTL utter fail!

I feel awful saying it, but I'm worried that the witch-woman might be correct in saying Adele would be better off dead... ;A; Gah! What will happen?!

That aside, I really have to commend you on your top-class worldbuilding. It's pretty much never that I find a story that does it so well that I not only fully understand the world workings (as they've been explained, anyway), bur actively want to go in there and fix these injustices!

Now to the next chapter. I can't go to sleep after this!

I somehow got through all that was before, even poor Wil, and then this-! You monster! XD

Seriously, I did not see this one coming. Good lord! You are very crafty!

That aside, I am seriously enjoying this story. It's kinda interesting (at least for me) that I don't have the urge to slash Rodan and Kasha. I kinda wonder if it's possible, considering their feelings for Wil/Adele. At most, they can only lick each others wounds (that came off creepier than I'd intended, thinking if it from a Puran perspective. *shudder*)

tl;dr - awesome story so far, nice and long and deliciously complicated in all the right ways. :D

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Yaaaay! Glad that things are working out for Rodan and his children. Things can only get better now (unless something bad happens :/) haha More please!

D'awww adorable reunion! I'm still sad to see them go back to Milark (horrible country : ( ) when they could stay in Denali. I'm disappointed in Kasha for not offering anyway. It's not like they'd have to deal with many typical Delnalis in his estate.

Oh Abele... :( They're all hurting now. Denali is the mantra they keep repeating in their heads but there is no sudden cure for the injuries they have all received from Puran. But I'm sure time and love will help... More please!

Agh, this hurts. Poor Abele. Poor Rodan. Poor Kasha. I don't know who I feel sorry for more.

Jeesh I thought you said that this would be getting progressively happier from Abele's saving onward. xD I guess there's just too much appetite for drama.

Is it too bad that I'm hoping for a love triangle here? I'm starting to like Rodan a lot but I also like Kasha and Abele together. : I don't want Rodan to end up alone.

Gotta wait I guess. *sits down and waits*

:D

Please don't let Rodan be foreshadowing anything. It will break my heart.

Honestly, I have no idea where this story is going to go at this point. I don't know how much more you are planning on writing, but I already was trying to figure out what was going to happen after they found Puran and now with Abele I just don't know. It isn't really a good or bad thing, just as a reader that is how I feel. Maybe that is what you are intending! ;)