D::::::::: WHAAAT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ;-; -teary eyed- I honestly did not expect that. Now I even more want to know what's going to happen next! Poor Abele! DX

HOLY SHIT
I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAt
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME
AHHHHHHhhhhhh :(

Oh boy. I hope Rodan is right. Be careful Kasha. Be brave for Abele!

:) dundundun

The meanest cliffy ever! well, if I was Kasha I'de be passing out any moment. And all the guards there seem as big and intimidating as Rodan, can he manage them all? -Great development.

Eagerly awaiting more!

I believe this is called redemption? Haha it's nice how Kasha and Rodan are beginning to heal each other. Perhaps there is a place for their loved ones, if not, at least they are at peace. :)

Now thay the Rodan/Kasha thing has happened (will keep happening?) I'm rather pleased with the development. For a while there, I wasn't so sure how much I would believe it when it came, but its turned out well. I know they're not a talkative pair, but I do like it when they do talk. They have such different ideologies, I just like hearing them try to reconcile it. Looking forward to more (even if its more sex without the talking. Or both. Or, you know, story).

Wow, I had just added the story to Alert and there's already an update! Me likes. :)

Finally. That's all that needs to be said.

I was pretty much in tears when Rodan woke and was talking about his dream of Wil and then Kasha was talking about what it was like to live without Abele. :)

I'm somewhat surprised by the end of the chapter, and yet it's fitting. Next up: vengeance?

oh man, didn't see that coming!

hah.

pun intended.

it is less depressing than usual though :P - LF

Maybe.. the end. I don't know how to fix it, but it seems a little.. hyperbolic, almost? I understand that you're trying to convey desperation, but the 'leaping' and 'tackling' seems a bit much... maybe use different words? I'm not sure. That was the only part that got me. Otherwise, I really liked this chapter!

oh wow
okay im just gonna go cry
great chapter
but ouch - LF

What is up with the Telps? Is there even anything of value in the monastery? I half don't want to know what really happened to Wil in prison when Pur got to him... And certainly not what Puran did to Abele.

Oh god Wanda stop it please you're breaking my heart. Poor Wil. Sob.
Also, a question, why did Rod become Rodan and Pur become Puran. It is a married man thing or what? Sorry if you've already answered this in the story, and I'm just being unobservant.