Reviews for Love Lessons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I suggest adding more of the characters thoughts and feelings Little bit... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story. But it's all a bit rushed. And I think you could add in a bit more descriptions. There's mostly just dialogue and it makes it kind of hard to really relate to Noah. I mean, sure, it's horrible what he's going through, but how does he feel? And PLEASE don't end this here. It wouldn't be satisfying at all! ;_; |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep it going it getting really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() KEEP GOING! RAWR THIS DINO COMMANDS YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhhmigosh~! Was NOT expecting that one right there. Wooo ._. Definatelyyy looking forward to that next update. Wow / |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazeballs. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a great storyline although i think you could do more describing. If you need some help with the description you should try reading some other male on male stories so you can detail yours more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it would be nice to have some sort of time line to start like, "few hours later or few weeks later" as it seems sorta jumpy, but Good job elsewise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snap. I can't believe he said that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. Last chap was was so sad! Story is heartbreaking. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job, but you're right, way too short. Good job tho... On the other hand, I'm having a helluva time uploading stuff, are you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww man this is awesome. Update soon! I'm a fan :) -Chester. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work! I like this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;A; This story...is beautiful. It really is ._. you had me giggling and gasping while reading this, its just..wow. You just got yourself a dedicated reader, and if you need any help- any at all- just let me know and I'll be more than happy to help~ Keep up the awesome T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, so good. :) Except, the chapter was a little short, but it was still interesting. I think it's funny how his client is in love with him. Can't wait for the next chapter |