Reviews for Love Lessons
ZChan-Kerokero chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
I suggest adding more of the characters thoughts and feelings
Little bit...
Facella chapter 6 . 1/3/2013
I really like your story. But it's all a bit rushed. And I think you could add in a bit more descriptions. There's mostly just dialogue and it makes it kind of hard to really relate to Noah. I mean, sure, it's horrible what he's going through, but how does he feel?
And PLEASE don't end this here. It wouldn't be satisfying at all! ;_;
sunny-california chapter 6 . 3/25/2012
keep it going it getting really good
yaoi8808 chapter 6 . 3/24/2012
KEEP GOING! RAWR THIS DINO COMMANDS YOU!
6xXBladeXx9 chapter 5 . 3/7/2012
Ohhhhhmigosh!

Was NOT expecting that one right there. Wooo ._.

Definatelyyy looking forward to that next update. Wow /
CharlieTehUnicron chapter 2 . 3/7/2012
Amazeballs. (:
Katie-apple-easy-mac chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
You have a great storyline although i think you could do more describing. If you need some help with the description you should try reading some other male on male stories so you can detail yours more.
Subbie chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
it would be nice to have some sort of time line to start like, "few hours later or few weeks later" as it seems sorta jumpy, but Good job elsewise!
Blank Papyrus chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
Oh snap. I can't believe he said that
SiahXSiren chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
Omg. Last chap was was so sad! Story is heartbreaking. Update soon
Subbie chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
Nice job, but you're right, way too short. Good job tho...

On the other hand, I'm having a helluva time uploading stuff, are you?
Gimme Back My Pigeon chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
Aww man this is awesome. Update soon! I'm a fan :)

-Chester.
harrylover21 chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
Nice work! I like this story!
6xXBladeXx9 chapter 2 . 2/21/2012
;A;

This story...is beautiful. It really is ._. you had me giggling and gasping while reading this, its just..wow.

You just got yourself a dedicated reader, and if you need any help- any at all- just let me know and I'll be more than happy to help

Keep up the awesome T_T
SweetChoco71 chapter 2 . 2/20/2012
So far, so good. :) Except, the chapter was a little short, but it was still interesting. I think it's funny how his client is in love with him. Can't wait for the next chapter
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