Reviews for Wannabe Runaway
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
This one is very interesting, I love it, but hope it doesn't come from personal experience. If this were a story, I'd think the relationship between Him and Her needs to be more clear, but for a poem it works well, the ambiguity makes it more relatable. Great job! :)
LazyBlueCat chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
:0 Speechless.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Brilliant, I thought I review this. Maybe I didn't click submit. I really liked it with its hauting imagery, I wasn't sure if I like him in this? He seems scary but she seems to love him or is scared of him. Brilliant piece though!