Your story is amazing! I love the idea of it. It's cool how it's kind of a sci-fi idea except it's not...
The only thing is that in chapter 7 we were in July... in chapter 8 we went back to June 7th again.
While i'm here, you may want to give more of a description for your other stories. It's hard to understand what they're about.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Shankoo good fellow!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

That's all I can say. keep up the good work!

This is wonderful!

Char should go into depression and Lynn should learn sign language.

Please update!

Thanks for updating.