Reviews for Killing Maine
Guest chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
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Misanthropic and Apathetic chapter 8 . 1/11/2014
Is it too late for me to get in on the mailing action?

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I pray it's not too late... -_-
Catkac chapter 8 . 11/19/2013
Uh, hi, I would love to receive the chapters of this story, so, please:

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Thank you! :)
nilovelle18 chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
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I Can Breathe chapter 8 . 4/10/2013
Hello, I would like to join the mailing list: at gmail . com
I just read through the 7 chapters posted and this story is definitely intriguing. Usually main characters are likeable but I find that in your story, that is not your goal. I sympathize with Maine to a degree but I can relate to Malcolm's criticisms - he is very awkward and it's a bit uncomfortable to read which in my opinion is a good way to make him believable.
Malcolm is very unlikeable - usually in stories like this, brothercest and all, he would be nice to his brother and hide his sadistic side but here, that's not the case. He's cruel and almost seems incapable of loving.
I like Sheldon but feel sorry and partly blame for the way Malcolm acts - I get that he doesn't stand up to Malcolm because he's all the family he has but I want to see exactly what Malcolm has done to him to hurt him cause I'm sure there's something major.
You're take on romance is different in the sense that it's not all flowers and beauty, it's dark and destructive so far so I'm definitely enjoying that aspect.
[Fictionpress really does suck nowadays (I can't even login) so I'm glad you're being creative and creating this new way of getting your story out there]
Jodiexxx chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
Regarding your A/N: THANK YOU FOR NOT MAKING THE CHAPTER LONGER IN TREMAINE'S POV. I mean I love your story, I do. But god, I finished the chapter feeling so irked by him! Poor Sheldon:(

One whole chapter in Tremaine's POV...well, at least this confirms it - I knew I would dislike him. Don't get me wrong - your chapter was great. I just don't like him. XD But for the love of all that is hot-and-awesome-like-Malcolm, WHY, TREMAINE, WHY? Why are you so lacking in confidence it's almost repulsive to me?! His inner thoughts repelled me throughout the entire chapter - especially with his low self-esteem, constant hesitance, and stammering.

I was actually really surprised by how nice Sheldon was towards him. Then again, Sheldon struck me as the nice kind of guy to begin with anyway, so even if he was mildly repelled (and he probably wasn't even though I think he should) he'd probably still act nice outside. Just to be a kind soul. ...and probably draw Tremaine in by accident with his kindness. Grr.

EH?! Corrine tried to kill herself?! This raises so many questions. When did she try it? Before camp, that's why she was so secretive, or during camp? Hm... And Tremaine you annoying person. Quit it. Seriously. I really like Tiffany, though I couldn't help but keep criticizing Tremaine (inwardly) throughout the entire chapter (especially at the end where he ended up revealing Sheldon's 'secret' to Malcolm! WTH HE SAID HE WOULDN'T GIVE IT AWAY!). *worked up* Eventually I started thinking things like 'poor Tiffany, she has to hang out with a loser like him,' 'she must be just some kindhearted soul who took pity on him and so offered him a friendship in the name of compassion' etc. HAHA. One good thing though - I can sense a Malcolm-Sheldon conflict/confrontation coming! :D (Though I really wish it wasn't a confrontation but instead sudden realization of lust butobviouslythat'snotgonnahappenso.) So, FINE, Tremaine, you may have SOME use after all.

Oh, and I totally laughed at Tiffany's crush on Janet! That was pretty funny. One of the things that made me like her, apart from her confident and bright personality!

Anyway, sorry I spent so much of this review ranting about Tremaine. I'll keep it low in future reviews, since I kind of had my fill with this one. XD He riles me up so much! But yay Sheldon and Malcolm time coming up Thanks for letting us have more insight into Tremaine's character; it'd probably help us readers to support the Malcolm-Sheldon pairing even more! HAHAHA. XD Anyway, great chapter (and I super loved Malcolm's lack of tact/diplomacy towards Tremaine) and I'm looking forward to the next one! :D (you update CRAZY FAST!)
janichan143 chapter 8 . 2/16/2013
is my email. Please add me too. Thanks
rgrimes89 chapter 7 . 2/1/2013
Tremaine and Sheldon were SO awkward! I know that was intended, but I feel like they were even more awkward than you intended lol. I loved the surprises you dropped though, and I loved the way you handled the 'call me Maine'-link to title part. Tremaine's physical descriptions of Sheldon were great also, but a lot of Sheldon's reactions felt weird, like he doesn't know how to get rid of the part of himself that is like Malcolm. Malcolm was of course as strong a character as always.

I'm really excited about this story!
Fryvi chapter 7 . 1/31/2013
Nice chapter:D
The first part, with Sheldon and Tremaine, was maybe jumping a bit quickly between different moods, but the next part was excellent
Tremaine seems really cute! I like how flustered he was around Sheldon:D
I'm glad not everyone who meets Malcolm love him straight away.
PuzzledApproach chapter 7 . 1/30/2013
*You might want to check towards the beginning of the chapter wher Tremaine was comforting Sheldon by putting his arm on his shoulder, because you said it was tremaine's shoulder instead. Simple name mixup :)

I really liked this chapter! I cant wait for the next one but I am still a little stumped as to where Sheldon's friends stand with the whole Malcome situation. I hope you start to clear that up. Update again soon my dear!
Jodiexxx chapter 6 . 1/21/2013
Sorry for the late review; I've been really preoccupied with school. Thought I'd just come onto the computer to drop you a review and then go back to work. D:

Firstly, thank you for the uber long chapter! *hearts in eyes*
EEEK! Despite Malcolm's interference with Corrine and his teachers and all that, camp for Sheldon seems really fun and relaxing! Especially with the opening of the chapter. I had so much fun reading their bantering, it almost felt like I was right there beside them!

The atmosphere when it was revealed that Corrine was in contact with Malcolm grew really tense and stifling...the suspense felt really gripping, probably because of Malcolm's attitude/behavior/character that we've already seen in the past chapters. I thought it was going to be a not-so-fun chapter since Malcolm isn't actually in here, but in spite of that his presence in this chapter is still really heavy and noticeable!

Well, well, Alex! Good job, it's time you showed some concern about Corrine! Except that maybe you should do it in front of her.

Feels like Joe's sort of interested in Sheldon but not really. I mean, the light teasing and flirting is really cute! LOL at the R. L. Stine reference! That was really adorable, that scene was. I would really like to see more of Joe, if you ever decide to let him have some screen time in the future! :D

Whoa... "Obviously, Sheldon would wanna know about anything that involves his brother, Corrine." - this has me intrigued. Sounds like Sheldon talks a whole lot about his brother or something. Or maybe even has a slight obsession that Alex can see...? :O Maybe I'm overthinking this, haha! Poor Corrine. Malcolm you evil insidious monster.

This is a total cliffhanger, you. :'( The suspense is building up but there's nothing I can do to quell it because whatever's in the next chapter is probably something I'd never be expecting.

Another one: "He will force the truth out of Corrine at the most convenient time possible, and make her listen to reason." The 'will' part seems out of place, but it's probably the thing you mentioned earlier, about the past events and present/future planning! That's a wonderful quote, by the way. :D

I'm really, REALLY looking forward to your next chapter! :D

-J

PS. BTW, that's a really cute analogy! For some reason your author's note about feeling less like the new kid at school that everyone stares at but doesn't speak to put a silly smile on my face. XD
rgrimes89 chapter 6 . 1/11/2013
Much darker chapter and that was without Malcolm making a physical appearance!

Joe was an interesting addition, and although I wasn't keen on a lot of Alex and Corrine's behaviour, they were still brilliant characters, and have a bit impact on the story.

I missed Tremaine this chap. Kind of felt like Malcolm was ever-present lol.

Sheldon is adorable. But he's serious, he's not just mushy cuteness, and I love that about him too. He seems so helpless to prevent Malcolm's will!
Fryvi chapter 6 . 1/8/2013
This is just perfect:D I really like the flow of your writing, I can almost forget that I'm reading.
Can't help but like the fact that Sheldon is aware that he's gay either;)
Malcolm is kind of making me paranoid though, almost like I expect him to come and do something horrible to everyone Sheldon talks to x)
PuzzledApproach chapter 6 . 1/8/2013
loved this! update again soon please! I cant wait for sheldon to get back from camp to confront malcolm!
TMi The Dork in the Corner chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Love this story!
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