|Reviews for Veteran|
| Rayna chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This one spoke to me. I could feel it. The beginning is a very powerful image and i enjoyed it very much. The poem had a very nice rhythm. The only thing I have to say is that you should try and stick to the veteran theme. It is what captures the attention if the reader.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
This is written quite well and it is written in good reflection. Thank you for sharing this.