I love this story! seriously, I hardly got bored at all when I read it, and thats a rare occurrence great job :)

This was lots of fun to read :D

Dear Jill,

I'm sad to see the ending of this story because I loved it, a very good read indeed. Not lying wouldn't be putting it into my favs if I was. (If you ever check my favs I promise I'm not a slut. The only reason there's so many: I just have too much free time.)
Anyway thanks for the laughs!

-Aja

This was a pretty sweet story. I really liked it :D And the alternate review at the end always makes me laugh.

aww poor Cole! He so did not deserve that.

I really like this story. Love the characters.

This chapter made me feel bad for Cole...but he's still awesome.

I think this was a great start! Really interesting first chapter.

Awwww.. they are so cute together... kinda remind me of my self *cough*..
Congratz on finishing it though. I wish to read more of your pieces 3

Poor Cole... Perhaps the kids pick the language from the cats... there are 20 of them... and strays have the wicked mouth

I like the first chapter and hopefully the next one also... i wish you luck with your other story(ies)..

I've never been one to leave useful reviews, but as this is the last chapter I suppose I don't need to.

Lets start off with saying that it's rare that I find a story I truly enjoy. Almost no story on this site actually piques my interest. The last story to truly capture me in that way was a little story by Cassandra Clare. Yours kept my interest the same way.

I loved your characters. Cole's mother actually reminds me a lot of mine. Cole himself just seems really cute, personality-wise.

It would have been nice to hear a little more about your supporting characters, though I suppose that's not a huge complaint. You did resolve the plot, which is what matters.

If all of your work is this good, expect more attention from me in the future. I am a sucker for a good story.

Keep writing!

Lykan

Kind of a slice of life plot there. could have used a larger upswing towards the end. Maybe next time. Also it kind of seemed like the couple sort of fell into bed with each other and so they became a couple since everything happened in the last three chapters. I've got nothing against slice of life, and this was a nice, lighthearted journey.

Dear Jill,
I have read this a few months ago, when I didn't have a profile on fictionpress yet and I just found this again. I think you did a very good job with the story. The idea was unique and I liked the characters. I'm also very happy with the ending, because I just love happy-ends and the epilogue was just a very good conclusion.
:)

Ohmygoodness, I haven't seen a homeless protagonist story done so well. Very entrancing Cole is. I loved how neat and real his friends were. Haha, gotta love it.

3 Keep on writing!