Dear Jill,

That was one meaty chapter. And the ending was just how I wanted it to go. I think you can tell I definitely liked this story and the ending was perfect, but still… I'm kinda sad it's over. It was a fantastic read and no, I didn't count any typos.

Suze

PS. You actually kept me on my toes most of the time. Everything surprised me. Nothing was too cliché. Nicely done. I'm gonna go read your other stuff, k?

YAAAY! -arms flail- I knew it was sexual tension D: Awesome story, I loved it!

O.O oh. my. god. This was crazy and drama all over D: ilovedit.

A black eye? Goodness o.o Poor Jon though :/ -pats his hair- I can't wait to see how this all unfolds.

GEEZ, that Jon kid needs to relax a bit. That kind of hostility can come off as sexual tension~

:D Overall, really enjoyed the chapter.

Watchmen. I like Watchmen c: Loved the chapter. His friends seem like some really cool kids, haha.

Good luck to Cole!

Oh, I very much enjoyed this c: Your writing is wonderful and Mr. Reeves sounds gorgeous.

Oh goodness! It finishes there?

Oh well, at least it was a happy ending :)

Hey! I really liked this story. It had a certain realism factor that I liked and I like the characters too. It definitely wasn't the stereotypical slash story, and the situation that Cole was in itself was not the usual slash story. I'm actually glad that it wasn't a story with pointless gay sex. I liked the fact that all the characters had a human quality about them; I never felt that they were simply a supporting background, 2dimensional place holder for the story. The characterization was done fairly well. I like the fact that new characters came bit by bit and not at once, like how most people get to know new people. (If that even made sense) Also, I'm usually a bit iffy about stories written in first person because honestly, some people are not really the best at executing stories in first person, and I consider first person writing harder to write well in contrary to popular belief, but this was done really well, and I liked it. I felt like everything about the story had a continuous flow to it, and the events seemed to be very human.

Wow, this came out to be a much longer review than I expected. But I really liked this story and your writing style. Keep up the good work. : D

very fun story. I enjoyed it muchly.

Did I just stay up to read this entire story?

Yes, yes I did. Now it's 12:something in the morning and I have to get up in four and a half hours, but I am content.

I really enjoyed this story and the way it was written. It feels like I just picked up a small novel and read the entire thing. I laughed and felt sad and really felt like I became one of Cole's friends through the ordeal.

Fantabulous, keep up the great work!

PS I love Jess 3 She was so god damn fucking adorable! Haha

My na-

Oh crap I mean

Tsughi 3

Hiya, Jill.

First off I'd like to praise you for the accomplishment of making up all these amazingly original characters that are jumping around in the story. And for finishing. I have a great deal of problems on doing just that.

Love, Jess

Hiya, Jill.

Thanks for the action. And GOD everytime someone says Jensen to Cole I keep thinking of Jensen Ackles. Which has nothing to do with this. But good. Awesome. Like always and that. But pooooor Jon. The little bitch is probably lying somewhere crying his eyes out. And I'm well aware I called him a bitch. He's the one being one soo, not my fault. But awesome.

Love, Jess

Hihi, Jill.

Jess is just- I just love her. Haha, she's wonderful. I also really really like Edith. I can't stop seeing Cole all dirty and- Okay, Imma stop that. Just awesome. Awesome job.

L-o-v-e, Jess

Hey again, Jill.

First of all, I love The Cars! And little gay boy? Haha, you're too cruel. So, woman, where's that sex those teenagers have a little too much? Well, I guess I'll see. Great job. You have a talent.

Love, Jess