Reviews for Shinigami Twin
xxxyx chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
Well, reading your past scripted works really reminded me of Pogo-kun.
Oh, so Tyrin is only a temporary commander. I wonder why.
All white... indeed Seireitei-ish.
Welp. I don't remember Shao too, and Maria too, for that matter. Descriptions should be helpful.
Ah, action scene at twelve o'clock! Let's hope it's going to be interesting.
xxxyx chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
Ah, you poked the fourth wall once or twice, I see.
Well, I loved Tyrin's dynamic entry, the kick in the face through a wall. Jack seems like a shallow villain, but, meh.
And... another test. Heh.
xxxyx chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Hm, I wonder what made the grandfather stop being commander..
Hm, that's a bunch of commanders. Very manga-ish.
And... terrorists? O_O
xxxyx chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
Lol that headbutt. At first, I was like, 'meh, just training,' and then I lol'd.
'So I have to take a test within a test to find a test?' - yo daw*shot* But, lol, that was anticlimatic, yet interestingly... amusing.
This story sounds cliched most of the time, so far, but I can still enjoy reading it. Moving on...
xxxyx chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Hm, here I am, returning the reviews I got! And... don't mind me, I love starting from an author's earliest works; they give me an insight to how much they have grown hehe.
Lol, don't worry, I won't criticize things that you've outgrown.
Anyway, got to admit, I found it very similar to Bleach, yeah, just that the dead are transported by bus. There's action here, but nothing overly impressive. But... lol at the end.
Lolitroy chapter 19 . 8/21/2013
Wat i was hoping to see some AixTyrin stuff! Oh well. Still liked the ending though, even though it a dat cliffhanger -w-'
Funny chapter here. The end (the scene before the final one) was... weird. That's all I can say.

Lolitroy chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
Hahaha Tyrin. I wonder when will the romance blossom?
Still loving the story. There wasn't really much action, but it was still entertaining ;)

BTW I'm sure I already asked this but are you planning on doing a rewrite someday? In story format?
I'd make review 75 but... gtg. Gah,

Later then.
Lolitroy chapter 16 . 6/11/2013
I like this story, I really so. Humor, twists, stupid cliffhagers, and awesome action scenes. Nice, King, really nice. My favorite part by far in this chapter was the crazy fangirls who weren't really fangirls but crazy psychotic assassins :3

You should give Ai a bit more screentime, since she's kinda like the girl Tyrin's paired up with and nothing else. Although Rabendo sounds kinda awesome.
Lolitroy chapter 15 . 6/11/2013
Hahaha, poor Tyrin. I would've liked you to describe a little bit more regarding his mind, 'cuz all I pictured was a huge purple swirling room like Timmy Turner's mind.

Another cliffhanger. Why do you do this to me?
Lolitroy chapter 14 . 6/11/2013
I'm not dead! Yay!

Nice fight you had in here. Argh! Why do you always leave cliffhangers at the end? T-T

Edas's drink must've been too awesome.
Lolitroy chapter 13 . 6/2/2013
Good chapter. The beginning was kinda what the hell, but anyway.

New pairing! Yay! Holy crap, just found myself fangirling over this. Whatever, I'm liking Perkins so far (after all, what's a mana without the pervy guy?) and his relationship with Toshiko. Nice, nice.

And yay! I'm liking the arena idea so far.

P.S. What? Is Arizo a boy? Didn't know that...
Anyway, I'll continue reading tomorrow. I'm kinda sleepy right now :P
Lolitroy chapter 12 . 6/2/2013
"Tyrin: I have... something to say... readers... please vote in the... poll on the author's page... and... Don't forget to... leave a... review..." dafuq was that? Hahaha

Woot woot! AixTyrin moments everywhere! Toshiko is epic.
Lolitroy chapter 11 . 6/2/2013
You kill me with this story! Ack! I was hoping so bad he wasn't gonna die! Well, of course he wasn't gonna die, but I still felt like it.

I liked the flashback. Gives a good background about Tyrin, Leiws and Toshiko. I wanna see more AixTyrin moments!

Whoo, another cliffhanger.
This is an awesome story, it really is. Nice work :3
Lolitroy chapter 10 . 6/2/2013
You're really good at making suspense, did you know that? Gah, you were killing me this chapter. Good action scenes, and I now know I like the characters because it sort of saddened to to see Lewis and Tyrin fighting.

Thank god the two girls came to the rescue! Another peak of interest, by the way.

Man, I love this story! Going straight to favs :3
Lolitroy chapter 9 . 6/2/2013
Holy crap. Stupid cliffhanger!
And stupid conpire.

You know, I really want to know her name since she's the badass this arc. I wonder if I'll see it next chapter :3

Anyway, like the characterization so far, because despite here are many people talking at the same time I can still picture all of them and have come to know each of them, so kudos on that :3
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