interesting story! I wouldn't mind a third chapter as well :P

Wow! In awe:)

So she really didn't kill him! Hooray! But what was the snap and the sorry about?

But I'm really happy that he's alive:)

More more more! xDDD

I really like this chapter!

So a vampire, eh? Do you like vampires?

Also, at first I was completely against the girl and I hated her, but at the end when she whispered sorry, I felt sad for her...

Creative Criticism: I think that you ought to re-read and edit your story a bit because some words are repetitive and some are incorrectly spelled.

But I think it's really really good:)

Keep on writing!

Woah.

I don't even know what to say. There are so many feelings, so many sensations in this story. It's really well written.

I wonder which reaction he will have when he'll understand he's become a vampire. Despair, curiosity, fear?

Really interesting story, anyway.