|Reviews for Bad Influence|
| Erysimum chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
I love short poems, this one was very intriguing :) but a teensy concrit- the phrase "all the more worse" doesn't exist; it would just be "all the worse". Never mind about the grammar thing, I think that would probably flow better too. I like people to point out my grammar errors, so I hope you don't mind!
| Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Short but effective. Well done!