Reviews for The Story of Prince Geoff, Erien, and a Troll
Bloodlilly chapter 4 . 11/23/2004
funny! i especially like the bit about 'it's not supposed to rain on quests!' you've a knack for humor. I laughed out loud a few times, which is always proof that something is funny! .
Bil chapter 4 . 7/22/2002
Fantastic fun! I love your characters, they're absoltely brilliant.
ecko vale chapter 4 . 12/22/2001
it would be fun if erien had magic :)- great writing
Snowshoe Hare chapter 4 . 12/22/2001
I must agree with Kara Angellle, that a mare is most definitely not a male. Whether the definition including having given birth, I don't know. Maybe you could make him a gelding instead (a castrated male horse). This is very good, and I do hope you continue to expound on it. Somehow Geoff doesn't seem completely spineless and a sap, which he could easily have become, I imagine. I congratulate you on your skill in keeping him (at least in my opinion) an individual in the face of Erien's strong personality. This is rather long, and so shall finish. Farewell
Jenny the chica chapter 4 . 11/24/2001
Ack! more, More, MORE! Who cares about your busy schedule? (j/k..i do...and can relate..BUT) you MUST review, or else I'll sic the Great Turkey on you (and you'll just hav to read my story now to fully understand that dire threat! mwahahahaha...) Tootles! ~Jenny the chica~
gemmie chapter 1 . 9/27/2001
sorry, forgot to add story to fav ...
gemmie chapter 4 . 9/27/2001
LOL! great story! poor geoff ... oh well, he should get some adventures ... i can't wait for more!
Tyria Bell chapter 4 . 9/26/2001
Winnnnnnnndy! It's good! Who are those new people? I wanna know! Erien's rather stubborn ya know? "Twelfth princes, as a rule, didn't go on quests. Neither did girls, but Geoff had stopped telling Erien that several frying pan wavings ago" 's a cute line. Ok, I'm gonna go now!
Kara Angelle chapter 4 . 9/25/2001
Ack! Windy! you jus said last time that Carrot was a Him, a mare is a female horse which has already given birth. No horse can be a him and a her at the same time! Ack! you really do know nothing of horses, do you? Guess what! I actually posted my pathetic excuse for a B&tB fanfic, yu c'n go an read it if ya want, I posted the first two chapters at almost the same time, tell me whatcha think!
ArwenStar914 chapter 4 . 9/25/2001
Yay! Another chapter! Who hoo! **does a little jig** Don't worry m'dear, we all have school, and we all know how hard it is to update, and we will not do anything rash. (Unless, of course, you take 22 days to updates Belonging to Someone... *HINT HINT*...) Erm, yes, anyways... Wonderful chapter! Excellent! I do so love your stories. This is a splendid one. Do write more soon. Lovely. **ArwenStar**
Angel chapter 3 . 9/4/2001
As I said on MotN, I LOVE this story, Erien reminds me of what you would be like if you happened to somehow be transported to this era. She also reminds me of how I would LIKE to behave back then, but probably would lack the courage to speak up, she's very straitforward and says whatever pops into her mind. Anyways, I like this chapter, an I thought you meant she'd actually use her frying pan on somebody, but the frying pan sorta just sat there, very uninteresting on the part of the frying pan...
ArwenStar914 chapter 3 . 9/3/2001
Yay! ) Short, yes, but still cute. ) Ack, yes, curse wicked school. Stealing our time to write stories, precious, yes, it is precious... sorry, I'm tired and hence the Gollum thing... anywhoo, nice chapter, can't wait for the next one! ) **ArwenStar**
eva-kokaze-black chapter 2 . 7/20/2001
HOhohoho. I like it I like it...Erien, what a girl. As for We shall see, right? (We shall see _quickly_, right?)
ArwenStar914 chapter 2 . 7/18/2001
Well, first off I like the chapter title, heehee. Second of all, I love this story! It's so good! They were so many great/funny lines that I can't pick one (or ten even)! I love the part where everyone's looking at Erien like she's crazy and trying to explain why her idea was absurd. I liked how you described the king's face and how Geoff fell off the window sill, heehee. I also like the Chief Chancellor, very interesting character. "For heaven's sake finish your sentences!" haha! And I like her distaste for being a "damsel in distress" heehee. And I like when she says, "That's lovely Geoff. Come make the horse hold still." ) Wonderful wonderful wonderful (as always). You must update soon! Off to see what else I must review. **ArwenStar**
ArwenStar914 chapter 1 . 7/18/2001
Excellent, excellent, excellent. I liked the beginning where Erien went, "Good news!" she said. "I've found your troll. And it talks!" heehee. ) This is very good. I like Erien, my sort-of girl. Who says girls don't wear breeches? Heehee. Poor Geoff, I fear he shall be in for it with her. Ah well. Next chapter! **ArwenStar**
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