Reviews for Delilah Jones
SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This is really good, a sad story but brilliantly well written as always.
NearlyPrescient chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
really liked the lines "were gone. They disappeared one day. / Smoke from a crushed cigarette." great metaphor. and the shift in the piece right then was pretty incredible, just the change in tone and the sheer violence of it.

I also really liked the ending lines. there's something about it that's hopeful and at the same time defeated. a very effective mix.