Reviews for Dare to Fall
Miranda Catherine chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Little more detail and watch those run on sentences. Other than that, it is quite intriguing and I would very much like to read more! :)

-CED-
RavenclawEncyclopedia chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I went to a camp, this past summer, where I went to a writing class daily. My teacher told us that one of the most important things to do is show, not tell. At the beginning of this chapter, you were telling us about how Zane was whispered about and such. Instead of doing that, you could've shown us Zane's walk to the Fallen Well and had people whisper about him on the way, rather than simply informing us of what happened.

However, I am intrigued by your story. I am excited to read more, and I hope you update soon.

Mischief managed,

Riley