Reviews for Love thy captive
Ray-Anne chapter 11 . 8/1/2013
What-what? I feel like I missed a huge chunk of the story...Suddenly she's pregnant? No sexual act needed just his presence? Should probably explain that. There is no plot, no rise, no fall...No happy ending. It's just an elaborate one shot really.

I'm not saying you're not a good writer, you are, and with some amazing creativity.

But this was ... disappointing to read. Which, hey, not all stories end happily. But there is normally a better arc than one overheard conversation.
MusicDanceLive chapter 11 . 10/6/2012
I have to say I did enjoy the story a lot. I had read the hollow kingdoms before reading this and I liked that while there were definite correlations, it was also its own story. It was well written and realistic. Good job.
A.M. Kaila chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
I'm only chapter two, but I really like this story so far.