Reviews for The Experiments Book One: Broken
True Talker chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
This is truly very good and it is written well. You have captured my interest in your story here and with how you had ended I feel that you have more to write. If you are going to continue this I am interested in reading it. I like it really I do.

In the beginning you have an extra "s" on something that doesn't belong and there was one more thing. My apologies I hadn't taken notes about them.

Thank you for sharing this with everyone.