Reviews for The Soldier and The Popstar
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
umm... you make a big deal out of sharing his last name in the last lines, but right at the beginning he introduces himself "Private Troy MacMullin." Might want to fix that.
LiexTruth chapter 8 . 7/24/2013
Not to be a hater or anything...but, I kind of wished that they did kill JB. Just a little bit. I like the story! XD
360pages chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I would recommend adding more details into the conversation and characters. I would also make the chapters longer, short chapters work depending on the story and situation. An adventure story, or romance should have longer chapters.
DA-chen1 chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
Wow. It's really based on knowledge of the military stuff!

So, it's kinda too hard to understand it! Your idea is interesting and very special.

Well, you could explain the words and meanings? And why Selena?

And why has he contact to JB? What is behind this story?

Please, continue!

Mira