Reviews for Life Needs Water to Be
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
This seems quite Budhist! Lovely poem- thinking of how fresh water blends with the sea.
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
I think I've already shared my opinion on this, but it's still beautiful. XD
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
You used some lovely metaphors and like always it had amazing flow, it was like water in some senses. Great piece! :-D
Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
What a lovely, lovely metaphor. Favorite line:

"Waiting for your turn

To be swept out to the sea

And become a part of everything."

Wonderful work. Keep on writing!

Baaaaa,

Ewe.