|Reviews for Life Needs Water to Be|
| AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
This seems quite Budhist! Lovely poem- thinking of how fresh water blends with the sea.
| JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
I think I've already shared my opinion on this, but it's still beautiful. XD
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
You used some lovely metaphors and like always it had amazing flow, it was like water in some senses. Great piece! :-D
| Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
What a lovely, lovely metaphor. Favorite line:
"Waiting for your turn
To be swept out to the sea
And become a part of everything."
Wonderful work. Keep on writing!