|Reviews for Kiss|
| Goldylox chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
I reviewed this once before but a lot has changed since 2012. It's now 2014 and I've experienced my fair share of the world. Re-reading this brings me back fond memories and makes me deeply love sick, which is a very VERY good thing. I really do appreciate the realism of the piece and it's something that's true in every sense of a crush.
The last three lines make me want to cry, because they really are simply beautiful. As is the rest of the poem, but the last three lines hit me with a particular fondness.
Great job. :)
| Goldylox Santa chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Well, I know you, and I don't believe that it's "Purely fictional" and I don't believe it one bit. But, I'm not going to say more because I don't know who you've told about FP.
I already edited it, (or rather fixed it to make it more purtier) so I have nothing else to say here.