Reviews for Dead Rose
diverselove chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
I really like this song. It's very beautiful and tragic. I like the rose symbolism. This is brillant and very nice. You should keep up writing the emotion-filled songs like this.

Great work
Tokei Aya chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
This is a great song. Sad, but well written. like everyone, you could use improvement, but this is really good :) I'd love to hear someone sing it though. right now it's just words on a screen.

just remember that not all songs need to rhyme. I'm not saying that rhyming songs are bad, (I actually love them) but since it's hard to find rhyming words all the time, non-rhyming songs are a bit easier to write...at least that's my opinion.

keep it up!
AjaxCrimson chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
I love it, it's truly remarkable. You've got some amazing lyrical capabilities.