You had me hooked at 'WTF?' lol i love it so far, a very nice long chapter, a lot better than most of my first chapters to be honest. splendid, i can't wit to read more. oh but when you switch P.O.V.s, you might want to mark it by saying which P.O.V. it's going to so it doesn't get too confusing.

Good chapter, can't wait 'till the next favorite character in Lucy. She is headstrong but when she is frustrated she still tries to be poise.

I love this story. I hope she will end with Raice!

Don't stop to write it, I want to know the end!

I do think I like Raice better...just name-wise at the moment. xD His reaction to Lucy is certainly a lot stronger than Trent. 3 it so far.

This really is quite a compelling start. xD I like it. Little grammar errors too. ;)

Im in love with this story so far. Raice (i think thats how you spell it!) is already becoming my favorite. Cant wait to read the next update.

This story is much much better and i think i like trent cause he has a bad boy hint to him and i luuurvvee bad boys