|Reviews for A War of the Heart|
| jerrellsgirl112606 chapter 26 . 1/25/2013
Please post the new story i would love to reed it. I loved the last one so i cant wate for the next.
| littlemiss76 chapter 26 . 1/24/2013
No offense but demanding 20 reviews is a bit much, this time of year people go away and are usually busy. In Aus along we are very busy trying to get the kiddies back to school. Also if most people are like me IF someone demands reviews I tell them to stick it.
| WA0520 chapter 26 . 1/24/2013
If I already reviewed on the Epilogue and I review here begging for the next story does that count as two reviews...or just one.
If it's to [Insert annoying begging here]
XD Take your time, the anticipation will make it better when it finally comes out.
Good luck and have fun writing,
| Browelly-Pops chapter 25 . 1/17/2013
Love this story :)
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 25 . 1/7/2013
I vote for the post, I can't wait to know more loved this story. Only suggestion is some sort of beak in between pov swaps
| Kara P chapter 25 . 1/6/2013
Oh my goodness, that was great! I hate that it's over though. D:
On the other hand I can't wait for everyone else's stories! :D
| WA0520 chapter 25 . 1/5/2013
I think the Epilogue should include a bit more of Lucy and Raice since this is technically their story. And it might be better to use the last part with Trent as a Prologue for his story. Of course it's completely your decision to do whatever you wish, these are just suggestions. Otherwise, I think it is great, and I can't wait for the next part.
| may-bear chapter 21 . 1/5/2013
update again soon
| jerrellsgirl112606 chapter 25 . 1/5/2013
I just loved your story. I havent been on this site in years and yours was the first thing i read. I just loved it i cant wate for the next books. You are a good writer keep up the good work and i hope you start writing again soon.
| jendayi.j.griffith chapter 25 . 1/4/2013
ahhh yay trent found his mate i cant wait for the new book
| Alaeryel chapter 25 . 1/3/2013
HAD TO CALL 911-PARAMEDICS ON THE WAY-HEART ATTACK SUSPECTED! DAMN IT Night-sis just woke up so thus the review on this-the prior chapters JUST AS AMAZING AS THE REST-the fight was downright INTENSE AND SUSPENSEFUL! I wanted to die when Jaiden died-atleast Trent was sorry for his betrayal and I really like his mom-she seems so sweet. My heart BROKE when Braiden was told he couldn't shift anymore for fear of damaging his leg even more! I can hardly wait until Trent's story comes. So his mate is May-I like how you wrote that-IT WAS PERFECTION! NOW-I am on to your other story 'Turmoil of the Grave'-cannot wait to read it!
| Alaeryel chapter 16 . 1/3/2013
HELL-SHIT-DAMN-Night I feel like I need to vomit-I CANNOT BELIEVE that Jaiden was killed-WHAT THE BLOODY FUCK! I know I know-it is just a story but damnit girl-I am feeling EVERY EMOTION you have written and IT IS RIPPING ME APART! God I need to start getting ready but SHIT I CAN'T STOP-no hair and makeup today!
| Alaeryel chapter 15 . 1/3/2013
OH BLOODY HELL Night-this is HEART STOPPING, HEART WRENCHING and just DOWN RIGHT OUTSTANDING! I didn't see that coming-her father punching her! I cannot wait for the next chapter and I have to get ready for class so reading it first and will finish when I am done-DYING HERE-CAN'T GET ENOUGH!
| Alaeryel chapter 14 . 1/3/2013
Well-AGAIN this chapter brought TEARS TO MY EYES and RIPPED my HEART IN TWO! I am GLAD Lucy heard the whole story and NOW I CANNOT WAIT to see where you took this story Night! LORDY I have been CAPTURED TO NO END with it and your writing-YOU BLOW MY MIND!
| Alaeryel chapter 13 . 1/3/2013
OMG-this was BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE the story behind Aren and Hannah but want to know more! Trent is in a world of hurt-PLEASE tell me that you didn't kill him in the story! Raice's dad is there already and the SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! My heart BROKE for Braiden and Michael's remark after his twin left just made me cry harder for Braiden! Your story has CONNECTED to my SOUL!