Reviews for A War of the Heart
Alaeryel chapter 12 . 1/3/2013
DAMN DAMN DAMN-HOT HOT HOT! GIRL YOU ARE KILLING ME! My sis went to bed so got to read but couldn't review! One I have already been playing a daydream in my mind with Braiden so YES I would love to see a story for Braiden! I cannot believe Raice and Lucy mated and ALL HELL IS GONNA BREAK LOOSE! AMAZINGLY DONE Night and like I have told your sister-you should also try to get this published! I don't want to see anything happen to Trent-I have fallen for him (as a character-LOL) You and your sister just ASTOUND me with your stories and your writing!
Alaeryel chapter 5 . 1/2/2013
Alaeryel chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
BRILLIANT, AMAZING-again! I AM really ENJOYING THIS STORY Night and cannot wait to get to next one BUT YOU HAVE JUST CAPTURED ME HOOK LINE AND SINKER! I LOVE the idea of panther in a wolf pack-UNIQUE! I love Trent but Raice and Lucy seem DESTINED for one another-I cannot make my mind up BUT I will say this -I also like Jaiden and Candy-they are soooooooo sweet!
Alaeryel chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
WOW! GREAT chapter again my dear! My sis going to bed so won't be able to type and leave reviews but will get on tomorrow and leave for chapters I read tonight! I AM HEAD OVER HEELS FOR THIS STORY!
Venetiangrl92 chapter 25 . 1/2/2013
i am happy for Trent! also i hope that Braiden will be able to shift again! can't wait for the next story! hope it's up soon! xoxo
Alaeryel chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
Damn it Night-this was SUSPENSEFUL and INTRIGUING! Again it was BRILLIANTLY written and OMG JUST SHOOT ME NOW-I thought Trent would end up being her mate but then Raice's reaction COMPLETELY BLEW ME AWAY and THEN THEN Night-Raice isn't a werewolf? I LOVE Panthers and to find out he was one-PERFECTION! On to next chapter now!
x3bbyshortie chapter 25 . 1/2/2013
love the story but felt like you rushed the ending! Was really hoping for a more in dept of the fight and lives afterwards of everyone. Additionally hoping to read about raice and lucy life more with there upcoming baby! was really disappointed!
Venetiangrl92 chapter 24 . 1/2/2013
oh I am so happy right now! GREAT chapter! off to read ch.25 now! xoxo
Venetiangrl92 chapter 23 . 1/2/2013
oh no! i do hope everyone lives and is alright! off to read Ch/24 now! xoxo
Alaeryel chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Ok Night-I hope you don't mind the nickname-I have given your sister one too. I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED THIS CHAPTER! I didn't realize you were Destiny1406 sister. You both are AMAZING WRITERS and the stories are PURE PERFECTION for me! I am really looking forward to more of this one and then the other story! Your sister recommended you to me in a pm a few minutes ago but I was already reading-LOL-talk about coincidences and DESTINY (excuse the pum)! I really like Lucy-she has been through so much and her sister is a bit childish and spoiled-I also have fallen in love with Trent-I am quite excited as to where and how this story will play out so now I am on to the next chapter-GREAT JOB!
ravenhowards chapter 25 . 1/2/2013
Wow! Great way to end the story. I guess Trent's story is next in the series. YAY! Your concept and plot is great, however, I hope this next story will allow so more character development and connection.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/31/2012
I cried during Ch. 20 because I felt so bad for Candy and Drew. I think it so sad how they were separated. Hopefully they end up together later in the story because Lucy and Raice have about the same age difference. Please post more I'm really excited to see how this story unfolds.
jendayi.j.griffith chapter 21 . 12/31/2012
wait is lucy pregnant oh yaaay i hope she is i hope there all safe during the war
Van Quatra chapter 22 . 12/31/2012
well, well, they will be even moe protective now, great job and the surprise spoil was interesting.
Venetiangrl92 chapter 22 . 12/31/2012
Great chapter! so can't wait for the last couple of ones! Happy New Year! xoxo
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