|Reviews for Time, And The Maneuver|
| SiahXSiren chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
True. Times a hard one to beat. Nigh impossible
| Fainting In Coils chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Love the first line, like the third one. The second one is a bit iffy, though. Never win what, or against what?
| Loopdeloop chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
i quite like this piece. the phonetics especially struck me, the way every word seems to flow like liquid into the next. good meter, very smart.
that said, i think the first line is not as strong as the rest of it. it seems too obvious, not quite cliche, but not a unique enough phrase. also, the title is weak. i think "maneuver" should be a surprise when it appears in the poem. hope this helps.
| A Wandering Tiger chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
It's good and I wish there were more.
I enjoyed reading it, although I wish there was a summary. Maybe just 'A Haiku Poem'.
~A Wandering Tiger