I really enjoyed reading this, you really have a lot of talent. Though the story could use some improvement, it was a fun and interesting read. :) If you'd like someone to help you with it some, I'd be more than glad to help, just PM me if you'd like~

This was very good! I loved it especially during the scene in which Bronson was pretending to have sex with Penny :)

This is the first Western story I read and liked xD
I'll definitely be reading more of your awesome in the future!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story!

That was awsome! I was extremely impressed that you researched cowboy slang. I must admit that modern day slang anywhere in stories not set in the present time and place bug me. On the other hand i also know that language in all its rapid mutational glory would prove exceptionally difficult to understand even a hundred years ago. Have you tried reading Brahm Stoker's Dracula, yikes! And that was "propper" language, not the fun slang like your storie. Yes, I'm a language freak, please forgive my rantings. Just know that your stories rock and please keep writing! :-)
Heather

*sad face* didn't want it to end!

Me: Yay! Some good western yaoi, it's exteremly good so far! I love it, the details are really great to, really gave me an image of Coloton's appearance. Im not quite sure how the main character looks yet, other than hes indian and has aburn hair, but I cant wait to fully read this.

I have to say you have an unique style. Not bad but unique nonetheless.

Some transition confusion. Some oddly phrased parts but overall promising.

~Thomas~

I think I am officially in love with this story. The awkward romance is just adorable. Combined with cowboys and guns, it's amazing! There are some minor spelling issues, but I'm not one to talk about spelling. (It took me three tries just now to spell "spelling" correctly. XP)

I hope to see more soon!