Reviews for Hidden
StaySassy94 chapter 17 . 3/6/2012
Ohh, I knew Blake's plan was gonna be trouble... but then again, everything is going to be trouble in a murder case lol
StaySassy94 chapter 16 . 3/2/2012
I feel like Blake's plan is just going to get them in even more trouble XP

Great chapter! Keep it up!
StaySassy94 chapter 6 . 3/1/2012
Maybe Cody spills the beans... hmmmmmm...

Still awesome .
StaySassy94 chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
Blake is bad news... but I'm glad they're thinking about their reactions, though. It adds more info about the characters
StaySassy94 chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
I think John is going to be the one who gets the other two in trouble. He's not as cold as Blake and John. He'll probably end up telling someone.

Still very good :)
StaySassy94 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
I like it so far :) i did see some typos, but not enough to really take away from the awesome plot. Also, you seemed to repeat yourself, I notice when you wrote he poured water over the rag, damping it with his water bottle. It could be re-worded to flow better.

All in all, good start!
DestinyDances chapter 8 . 2/26/2012
This is good! :)
KatEatsLaughs chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Oh this is good, you should update RIGHT NOW, I'm surprised you don't have 73838393939393 reviews...anyways keep writing. PS I am too lazy to sign in!
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