|Reviews for Time To Forget|
| Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
There were a few points I noticed where I think you meant to create a new line, but the formatting error is something that can easily be sorted.
"And knowing that you can't join them because you are bound to this desolate place we call Earth." I get the point to this, but I think this line lost its intensity because it was dragged out. "And knowing you are bound to this desolate earth?" might sound better.
"And only you will remain,
Floating along in the rocky remains" I think this was an interesting bit of repetition and word play- it adds to the idea of dust and being decrepit and left behind.