|Reviews for Let's Pretend|
| Azziepop chapter 11 . 7/25/2013
This chapter was very good! I had totally forgotten about this book, so I read it from the beginning again! PLEASE update again soon!
| DarkAngel1130 chapter 11 . 7/12/2013
This chapter was Very entertaining. I'm so glad that Nate decided to take things up a notch and finally confront Riley about what happened between them that night. But I wish Riley hadn't run away from him again. I bet that hurt Nate like a punch to the gut. I wonder if he's going to try again or if he's done? If he's going to wait for Riley to be ready to be with him and realize that she does care about him? I hope so and I hope Riley doesn't ignore him anymore. But first things first, she needs to get over Zach. It's like they say, once a cheater, always a cheater. Update soon please!
| MayaLala chapter 11 . 7/12/2013
So this is a fun story but one that has no flavor. I see very little descriptive narration. You introduced a new character but then don't describe him in a way anyone can see. It's as if you have an outline with no paint. It needs that flavor to set it apart from other stories.
"Mason Carter," she said, pulling back to look into his devilish hazel eyes, "I can't believe it! What are you doing here?" His crooked smile and dusty blond hair hadn't changed in the three years since she last saw him but taking one look at his body, it was crystal clear, Mason Carter had grown up. A lot.
| Amy90 chapter 10 . 7/9/2013
Wow. Hopefully they'll talk!
| Azziepop chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
NOOOO write more please! UPDATE! UDATE! UDTAE!
| AMCtheatre chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
Update faster please!
| DarkAngel1130 chapter 10 . 7/4/2013
This story is amazing! I hope now that you're on summer vacation you'll update more often! I love Riley and Nate together. I think they're perfect for each other. I just hope Riley gets over the awkwardness between them and goes back to hanging out with Nate. I bet he's even sad because she's been ignoring him...
| hey chapter 5 . 7/3/2013
i'm kind of confused by the whole ana and ava name switcheroo thing that seems to be going on...because i'm pretty sure ana-or ava-doesn't have two first names. other than that, nice job. oooohh, zach...riley sure is taking her sweet time with the whole jealous boyfriend plan 101.
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
Nice going..lighthearted and cute story..waiting for quick updates..! LOL!
| MayaLala chapter 10 . 7/3/2013
| Amy90 chapter 9 . 11/30/2012
Great chapter! I'm glad Ry finally realized it.
Poor Ava, I don't think Zach really loves her.
Does the story end here or will Zach try to get her back?
| Cata chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Hello, I'm chilean but I found this story looking for something new. My english is awful, but I'm trying leave you a good comment :)
First I want congrats you because this story is VERY COOL, I fell in love with Nate and Riley, is a couple super cliché but you could make them different :)
I going to be attentive to see if you updated a new chapter.
Goodbye, take care yourself XOXO
| TamikaT chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
Okay, way to go Ry. I am glad you put Zach in his place. He may have slept with Ava for dumb reasons but now he has responsibilities that he needs to be there for and take care of. He may not stay with Ava forever, but he can't be with Ry now just because he is jealous. That is not the basis for a good relationship. Big girl talk for Ry! Two thumbs up.
Now, I see in th last lines that Ry and Zach did not sleep together. Good job Ry! I was a little bit worried there is a minute, but I am glad you did not stoop to that level to get him back. He really was not worth your time and effort. Nate is a great guy and your best friend so it just fits. Being friends before lovers makes the relationship a whole lot more meaningful. Now I just hope you two don't regret anything in the morning. It is time for a serious talk between you two. I think you both have the same feelings for each other, but are just too afraid to admit them.
Loving this story. I feel like it is almost at the end, but I really enjoyed every single bit of it! Please keep writing!
| TamikaT chapter 8 . 11/29/2012
Okay, I am a little bit confused here. So Ry started back hooking up with Zach on the creep after the kiss at the beach house...are they (Ry and Zach) sleeping together now too? Because I am confused as to them sneaking around. If I recall correctly the whole reason he slept with Ava and bombed her out at the party in chapter 1 was because she would not "put out" and he called her a tease. So is she now "putting out" just to get him back? Or are they have kissing and heavy patting? The reason why I ask is because it makes Ry look really desperate and cheap and not better than Ava was in the beginning, because she is now doing the same thing. Zach is winning all around if she is sleeping with him because he (as my mom says) has his cake and is eating it too. Ry should really just leave him alone (which she said she would do at the end), but she needs to get control over how she feels about Nate too. They really need to have a talk and determine whether they are still just pretending or really starting to get into each other. Very excellent chapter. I love it! Please keep writing.
| heal me forever chapter 9 . 11/29/2012
gosh dat was good hope she stays wid nate :)